Bug#529374: gcal: Confusingly worded sentence in long description
Subject: gcal: Confusingly worded sentence in long description
Package: gcal
Severity: minor
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The final sentence of the long description for gcal in APT is a bit
confusing. I recommend replacing:
So it's imaginable after booting the computer or starting the work
session, that the user is informed on screen or by means of electronic
mail, about all holidays or appointments which are observed or
scheduled for that day.
With something like:
So it is possible for users to receive an on-screen notification, at bootup
or login, of all holidays or appointments which take place on that day.
Notification by electronic mail is also possible.
Which is a bit easier to parse, at least for me.
-- System Information:
Debian Release: squeeze/sid
APT prefers testing
APT policy: (500, 'testing'), (500, 'stable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)
Kernel: Linux 2.6.28-1-amd64 (SMP w/2 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/bash
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