Re: Bits post for trixie release, please review and translate.

[Holger Wansing <hwansing@mailbox.org>]

Hi,

Am 9. August 2025 15:58:07 MESZ schrieb Anupa Ann Joseph <anupa@debian.org>:
>We appreciate comments, reviews and translations for this post
>available here:
>https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/bits/-/blob/master/content/2025/project/trixie-released.md

What irritates me is the paragraph “
Already a happy Debian user and you only want to upgrade?"

There is a sentence (the second) talking about fresh install ("Fresh installation ISOs now available ... ") in a paragraph explicitely dedicated to the upgrade way.

Either move that sentence into a separate paragraph as "Or want a fresh install?" 

or change the headline, so it mentions both cases, like "Already a happy Debian user and you only want to upgrade? Or need a fresh install?"


Holger


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