Re: Offer to help with DPN proofreading
On Friday 10 Apr 2015 10:43:51 Paul Wise wrote:
> Now seems to be a good time to review as we have quite a bit of text
> already.
OK I had a look and made some changes. Mostly spelling / typos. Only possibly
significant thing, I changed "delegations" for "appointments" in the Tech Ctte
bit.
Diff attached (my first, so hope it's not broke anything).
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Chris
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--- dpnold.html 2015-04-10 11:30:12.000000000 +0100
+++ dpn.html 2015-04-10 11:30:32.000000000 +0100
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-#use wml::debian::projectnews::header PUBDATE="2015-XX-XX" SUMMARY=""
+#use wml::debian::projectnews::header PUBDATE="2015-XX-XX" SUMMARY=""
# $Id: index.wml-template 6181 2015-03-09 18:01:32Z dnorwood-guest $
# $Rev: 6181 $
@@ -22,14 +22,13 @@
of the Outreach Program for Women. She writes on <a href="https://apparmor.451f.org/2014/12/23/how-does-my-apparmor-profile-get-into-debian/";>first starting</a> with <a href="http://wiki.apparmor.net/index.php/Main_Page";>AppArmor</a> and
her learning curve with both it and with Debian, sharing the maturation process
from being uncomfortable at first to later <a href="https://apparmor.451f.org/2014/12/23/how-to-contribute-to-the-apparmor-upstream-profiles/";>authoring documentation</a> on how
-others could contribute. Although the intership has ended the work continues as
-she still plans on contributing as a member of the AppArmor Packaging team as
-fellow team member.
+others could contribute. Although the internship has ended the work continues as
+she still plans on contributing as a member of the AppArmor Packaging team.
</p>
<p>Gregor Herrmann <a href="http://info.comodo.priv.at/blog/rc_bugs_2015_07_10.html";>updates</a> on RC bugs he worked on towards Jessie's release</p>
<p>Freexian’s Debian Long Term Support <a href="http://raphaelhertzog.com/2015/03/17/freexians-report-about-debian-long-term-support-february-2015/";>report</a> for February 2015 details the work of 58
-work hours spent amoung the 4 paid contributors. <a href="http://www.decadent.org.uk/ben/blog/debian-lts-work-february-2015.html";>Ben Hutchings</a> worked on
+work hours spent among the 4 paid contributors. <a href="http://www.decadent.org.uk/ben/blog/debian-lts-work-february-2015.html";>Ben Hutchings</a> worked on
linux-2.6 version 2.6.32-48squeeze11, userland and security updates. <a href="http://layer-acht.org/thinking/blog/20150310-lts-february-2015/";>Holger Levsen</a>
worked on the security tracker package. <a href="http://raphaelhertzog.com/2015/03/06/my-free-software-activities-in-february-2015/";>Raphaël Hertzog</a> worked mostly on CVE
Triage with 41 commits to the tracker, a helper script for that process and a
@@ -109,7 +108,7 @@
<p>Zlatan Todorić interviews <a href="http://zgrimshell.github.io/interviews-with-floss-developers-laura-arjona/";>Laura Arjona</a> as part of a series on FLOSS developers.
Laura talks about applying to become a Debian Developer, her future plans in
-Debian, self service hosting and administration. </p>
+Debian, self service hosting and administration.</p>
<p><a href="http://stefano.zacchiroli.usesthis.com/";>Stefano Zacchiroli</a> was interviewed by <a href="http://usesthis.com/";>The Setup</a> where he details the equipment
and software that a computer researcher and Debian Developer uses for getting
@@ -135,7 +134,7 @@
<p>
Following a vote and change to our constitution regarding <a href="https://www.debian.org/vote/2014/vote_004";>term limits for technical committee members</a> and the manner in which those positions will
-expire, new delegations were <a href="https://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2015/03/msg00003.html";>announced</a> for Sam Hartman, Tollef Fog Heen, and
+expire, new appointments were <a href="https://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2015/03/msg00003.html";>announced</a> for Sam Hartman, Tollef Fog Heen, and
Didier Raboud.
</p>
@@ -143,19 +142,19 @@
<ul>
<li>Gitorious and Codehaus will be closing soon. <a href="https://about.gitlab.com/2015/03/03/gitlab-acquires-gitorious/";>Gitorious</a> will shut down at the
-end of May and <a href="https://codehaus.org/";>Codehaus</a> will be removing projects from April 2nd onwards.</li>
+end of May and <a href="https://codehaus.org/";>Codehaus</a> will be removing projects from April 2nd onwards.</li>
<li>There is currently a queue of prospective Debian members waiting for
-Application Managers (Ams) If you would like to help please contact the
+Application Managers (AMs). If you would like to help please contact the
<a href="https://wiki.debian.org/Teams/FrontDesk";>New Members Front Desk</a>.</li>
<li>check-all-the-things is a tool to check all of the things related to an unpacked
-or post-build source package or VCS repository It will <a href="https://ftp-master.debian.org/new/check-all-the-things_2015.02.04.html";>soon be available in</a>
+or post-build source package or VCS repository. It will <a href="https://ftp-master.debian.org/new/check-all-the-things_2015.02.04.html";>soon be available in</a>
experimental and can be checked out from collab-maint git.</li>
<li>Debian's hardware donations wishlist has moved to the Debian wiki to allow all
Debian contributors to add their Debian-related hardware wishlists. If you have
a need for hardware to enable your work on Debian, please <a href="https://wiki.debian.org/Hardware/Wanted#add";>add an entry</a> to the
wiki so that hardware donors can contact you about it.</li>
<li>There has been a change in how our <a href="https://lists.debian.org/debian-services-admin/2015/01/msg00002.html";>SSL cert config</a> is setup. Going forward
-DSA-administered machines do not trust any CA certs and will only trust SSL
+DSA-administered machines do not trust any CA certs and will only trust SSL
certs for debian.org services.</li>
</ul>
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