Review (Re: DPN 2013/15 frozen. Please review and translate.)
On 2013-07-19 19:08, David Prévot wrote:
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Hi all,
We have just finished the last bits of the new (short) issue of DPN
to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations.
Instructions are available on the wiki:
http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews
As usual, the last updated version is available on the publicity
Subversion repository, even via HTTP:
http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?view=co
If you're willing to contribute to the redaction of the next issue,
don't hesitate, and join #debian-publicity IRC channel or send a message
to debian-publicity@lists.debian.org.
Cheers,
David
Thank you very much David and everyone. Here are my remarks:
Lucas Nussbaum, Debian Project Leader, gave an
<a href="http://www.itwire.com/business-it-news/open-source/60564-new-debian-leader-seeks-more-innovation-within-project";>interview
to ITWire</a> highlighting ways to seek more innovation within the project.
I find the phrasing odd. s/seek more/boost/ ?
Among other things, Lucas mentioned the current state of the NEW queue that
contains<a href="http://ftp-master.debian.org/new.html";>nearly 300 packages
waiting</a>.
The phrasing isn't quite right. I suggest:
Among other things, Lucas mentioned the current state of the NEW queue, where<a href="http://ftp-master.debian.org/new.html";>nearly 300 packages are
waiting</a>.
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Filipus Klutiero
http://www.philippecloutier.com
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