Review (Re: DPN 11/2013 frozen. Please review and translate.)

[Filipus Klutiero <chealer@gmail.com>]

On 2013-05-25 05:46, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> (please reply on -publicity list)
>
> Hi all,
>
> with a bit of delay (sorry!), we finished to draft the next issue of
> DPN to be released on Monday. We would appreciate reviews and
> translations.
>
> Instructions are available on the wiki:
> http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews
>
> As usual, the last updated version is available on the publicity
> Subversion repository, even via HTTP:
> http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?view=co
>
> Cheers,
> Francesca

Thank you very much Francesca and everyone. Just one remark.

> The Debian GNU/Hurd team announced
> <a href="$(HOME)/ports/hurd/hurd-news">the release of Debian
> GNU/Hurd 2013.</a>  This is not an official Debian release, but it is an official
> Debian GNU/Hurd port release.

I find this rather confusing. What is an official Debian GNU/Hurd port release? I know the sentence is copied from the announcement, but I suggest to just say "This is not an official Debian release."
Note that the website pages on hurd-i386 are currently outdated.

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