Review (Re: DPN 10/2013 frozen. Please review and translate.)
Hi Francesca,
On 2013-05-10 13:52, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
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Hi all,
We have just finished the last bits of the new issue of DPN
to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations.
Instructions are available on the wiki:
http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews
As usual, the last updated version is available on the publicity
Subversion repository, even via HTTP:
http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?view=co
Cheers,
Francesca
Thank you very much. Here are my remarks:
27 months after the release of Debian 6.0<q>Squeeze</q>, a new
stable version of the Debian operating system, Debian 7.0
<q>Wheezy</q> <a
href="$(HOME)/News/2013/20130504">was released
on May 4, 2013</a>.
There should be a comma after "Wheezy".
Chuvala mentioned they<q>needed an operating
system that was stable and reliable</q>, and that they will rely on The Linux
Foundation for training their astronauts and IT specialists.
s/The Linux Foundation/the Linux Foundation/
There is one upcoming Debian-related events:
s/events/event/
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Filipus Klutiero
http://www.philippecloutier.com
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