On 2013-02-15 16:06, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
(please reply on -publicity list) Hi all, we just finished the last bits of the new issue of DPN to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations. Instructions are available on the wiki: http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews As usual, the last updated version is available on the publicity Subversion repository, even via HTTP: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?view=co Please note that the first paragraph (the one about d-i RC1 release) isn't complete yet, as the release of the Debian Installer is scheduled more or less in the weekend, so we'll add that one at the very last minute: apologies to the translators. Cheers, Francesca Thank you Francesca and everyone. Here are my remarks. "the dates that Debian's 800,000th and 1,000,000th bugs will be filed" sounds wrong. i am not a native speaker of English, but I'd suggestHe now <a href="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2013/02/msg00002.html">"http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2013/02/msg00002.html">invites everyone to participate</a> in contests to predict the dates that Debian's <a href="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://wiki.debian.org/800000thBugContest">"http://wiki.debian.org/800000thBugContest">800,000th and 1,000,000th bugs will be filed</a>. "the dates that Debian's 800,000th and 1,000,000th bugs will be filed on" or "when Debian's 800,000th and 1,000,000th bugs will be filed" Also, a bug cannot be filed. A bug report can, however. The paragraph should discuss either tickets or issue reports. <rcstatslink release="Wheezy" url="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://richardhartmann.de/blog/posts/2013/02/15-Debian_Release_Critical_Bug_report_for_Week_07/">"http://richardhartmann.de/blog/posts/2013/02/15-Debian_Release_Critical_Bug_report_for_Week_07/" testing="194" tobefixed="66" /> According to the source, there are actually 128 RC bugs to be fixed |