Review (Re: DPN 2013/15 frozen. Please review and translate.)
On 2013-07-19 19:08, David Prévot wrote:
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We have just finished the last bits of the new (short) issue of DPN
to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations.
Instructions are available on the wiki:
As usual, the last updated version is available on the publicity
Subversion repository, even via HTTP:
If you're willing to contribute to the redaction of the next issue,
don't hesitate, and join #debian-publicity IRC channel or send a message
Thank you very much David and everyone. Here are my remarks:
Lucas Nussbaum, Debian Project Leader, gave an
to ITWire</a> highlighting ways to seek more innovation within the project.
I find the phrasing odd. s/seek more/boost/ ?
Among other things, Lucas mentioned the current state of the NEW queue that
contains<a href="http://ftp-master.debian.org/new.html">nearly 300 packages
The phrasing isn't quite right. I suggest:
Among other things, Lucas mentioned the current state of the NEW queue, where<a href="http://ftp-master.debian.org/new.html">nearly 300 packages are