Hi Steffen, Thanks for your review! On Tue, Apr 02, 2013 at 11:43:00PM +0200, "Steffen Möller" wrote: > from a very quick read ... I suggest removing the "we" since it is used for > only one side of this joint announcement. Also, all in-jokes should go, like in > the "embarrassingly good deal" since not everyone knows Debian to be free. > I'm reading the 'we' as 'we at bytemark' - it's part of the quote from them. Similar for the good deal section. Neil
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