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Re: DPN 2013/04 frozen. Please review and translate.

On 2013-02-15 16:06, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
(please reply on -publicity list)

Hi all,

we just finished the last bits of the new issue of DPN to be released
Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations.

Instructions are available on the wiki:

As usual, the last updated version is available on the publicity
Subversion repository, even via HTTP:

Please note that the first paragraph (the one about d-i RC1 release) 
isn't complete yet, as the release of the Debian Installer is scheduled
more or less in the weekend, so we'll add that one at the very last
minute: apologies to the translators.


Thank you Francesca and everyone. Here are my remarks.

He now
<a href="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2013/02/msg00002.html">"http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2013/02/msg00002.html">invites
everyone to participate</a> in contests to predict the dates that Debian's
<a href="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://wiki.debian.org/800000thBugContest">"http://wiki.debian.org/800000thBugContest">800,000th and
1,000,000th bugs will be filed</a>.
"the dates that Debian's 800,000th and 1,000,000th bugs will be filed" sounds wrong. i am not a native speaker of English, but I'd suggest
"the dates that Debian's 800,000th and 1,000,000th bugs will be filed on"
"when Debian's 800,000th and 1,000,000th bugs will be filed"

Also, a bug cannot be filed. A bug report can, however. The paragraph should discuss either tickets or issue reports.

<rcstatslink release="Wheezy"
	url="" class="moz-txt-link-rfc2396E" href="http://richardhartmann.de/blog/posts/2013/02/15-Debian_Release_Critical_Bug_report_for_Week_07/">"http://richardhartmann.de/blog/posts/2013/02/15-Debian_Release_Critical_Bug_report_for_Week_07/"
	tobefixed="66" />

According to the source, there are actually 128 RC bugs to be fixed

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