Re: "Request for test of d-i beta1" announcement, please review and translate

[Filipus Klutiero <chealer@gmail.com>]

On 2012-08-08 12:41, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> [cc-ing debian-boot: I totally forgot to do it in my first mail, sorry!]
>
> On Wed, Aug 08, 2012 at 10:02:41AM +0300, Andrei POPESCU wrote:
> > Hi,
> >
> > See attached a very intrusive patch.
> Thank you very much for the patch: I've just applied it.
> I've also slightly reworded the final part (and the title as well) to
> stress more the "request for help" concept.
> Thanks to you and Holger, now it seems quite good to me!
>
> New version available here:
> http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/2012/2012-08-09-dibeta1.wml?view=markup
>
>
> @debian-boot: as zack suggested we've drafted an announcement asking for
> help in testing the d-i beta release. I'd like to send it out tomorrow,
> can you please have a look at it, and give me your ack/nack?
>
>
> Cheers,
> Francesca

Thank you Francesca and everyone. Here are my remarks:

> This new release includes
> various improvements in different areas, like booting, Linux kernel, APT,
> low memory installs, and networking.

Either "the Linux kernel", or simply Linux.


> Installer CDs, other media and everything else you will need are
> available at the
> <a href="$(DEVEL)/debian-installer/">web site</a>.

I am not a native English speaker, but I'm not familiar with "at the web 
site". Maybe this should read "on the web site".