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Re: DPN 03/2012 frozen. Please review and translate.



Hello,
On Mon, Feb 06, 2012 at 01:05:56AM -0500, Filipus Klutiero wrote:
> On 2012-02-03 18:07, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> >In addition to their regular tests, since December 2011,
> >the piuparts maintainers have been testing the<a
> >href="http://piuparts.debian.org/squeeze2wheezy/";>upgrade of
> >individual packages from<q>Squeeze</q>  to<q>Wheezy</q></a>: 158
> >packages failed the test (and other 130 failed it due to dependencies)
> >while 33,708 passed it.
> 
> "other 130" should possibly read "130 more", but I'm not sure what
> this sentence means.
> 
> >Ben Hutchings announced that<a
> >href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2012/01/msg00012.html";>Debian
> >7.0<q>Wheezy</q>  will include Linux 3.2</a>  which is currently in
> >unstable and will soon enter testing.
> 
> There should be a comma after "3.2".

Why? Commas are used most sparingly in English and here I'm rather
sure no comma should be used. 

Greetings

         Helge
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