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Re: [RFR] wml://{intro/diversity,News/2012/20120420}.wml

On 2012-04-19 22:17, Filipus Klutiero wrote:
Thank you David, here are my remarks.

The Debian Project is pleased to announce the availability of
its<a href="">diversity statement</a>.

I find the approach of this announcement odd. I for one don't know anyone who has been waiting for the availability of the Debian Project's diversity statement... this sounds very formal for a message meant to encourage shy prospects to come forward.
I suggest turning this from an announcement into a message welcoming minority groups.

Sorry... to be clear, the message can also announce the issue of a diversity statement ("To this end, the project is issuing its first diversity statement [...]").

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