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Re: [Debconf-team] dc13 venue announcement? (was: [Publicity-commits] r3231 - /dpn/en/current/index.wml)

On Fri, Feb 24, 2012 at 1:36 PM, Gunnar Wolf <gwolf@gwolf.org> wrote:
Francesca Ciceri dijo [Fri, Feb 24, 2012 at 12:52:07PM +0100]:
> Sure! Thank you very much!
> In the meanwhile I've also found (thanks to h01ger) the minutes of the
> debconf-team meeting about it.
> I've just drafted an announcement: we only lack a nice quote from one (or
> more) members of the DebConf Committee and their ack.
> As usual the draft is into publicity SVN repository, also via HTTP at:
> http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/announcements/en/drafts/dc13-in-switzerland.wml?view=log


In line 29, I think "infact" should be "in fact". Or is it a valid
word as it is?

Gunnar, "infact" needs to be changed. (You are correct). However, stylistically I am not sure the use of "in fact" is optimal here.

I might tweak it to say (forgive me if I have overstepped).:

The two bids had both character and unique identities. On one hand, the Riga proposal was totally centered on city and university life. On the other hand, the Vaumarcus bid aimed to bring DebConf to a setting that is known for its natural beauty.

For line 44, please say that the decision will be made in
"approximately" 12 months, as it does not have to be by the end of

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