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Re: DPN 2012/1 frozen. Please review and translate

On Sb, 07 ian 12, 19:02:59, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> Hi!
> We just finished the last bits for the latest issue of the Debian Project
> News to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations.

See attached a patch with some minor corrections.

Kind regards,
Offtopic discussions among Debian users and developers:
From a5355ea266bccc0fa0cd4cd0c5d03caf3f5e4d25 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Andrei Popescu <andreimpopescu@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 7 Jan 2012 21:54:45 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] minor fixes

 dpn/en/current/index.wml |   12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/dpn/en/current/index.wml b/dpn/en/current/index.wml
index ae23787..e43bbd7 100644
--- a/dpn/en/current/index.wml
+++ b/dpn/en/current/index.wml
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-edu/";>Debian Edu mailing list</a>.
 Debian Edu is a project aimed to make a Debian Pure Blend for educational
 purposes, which could be used in schools and other educational
-institutions. The Debian Edu project develop and maintain <a
+institutions. The Debian Edu project develops and maintains <a
 href="http://www.skolelinux.org/";>Skolelinux</a>, a complete and free <q>out of
 the box</q> software solution for schools.
 For more informations about Debian Edu, please visit the
@@ -42,9 +42,9 @@ href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-devel-announce/2012/01/msg00001.html";>bits
 from the DPL</a> where he reported about the work done by Martin
 Michlmayr as Auditor, in order to reconstruct Debian expenses and
 budgets. Stefano also sent a call for help for the Wheezy artwork
-organization and announced that Gunnar Wolf has volunteered to monitor on
-behalf of Debian the discussion regarding the Creative Commons process
-for revision 4.0.
+organization and announced that Gunnar Wolf has volunteered to monitor
+the discussion regarding the Creative Commons process for revision 4.0
+on behalf of Debian.
 <toc-add-entry name="xserver">Forthcoming new release of the X server</toc-add-entry>
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ Acceleration in the Debian packages.</p>
 <toc-add-entry name="pnas">Scientific article on Debian in PNAS</toc-add-entry>
-Micheal Hanke <a
+Michael Hanke <a
 that the Proceedings of the National Academy of Science (<q>PNAS</q>) of the United
 States of America has a <a href="http://www.pnas.org/content/early/2011/11/14/1115960108.abstract";>\
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ href="http://wiki.jones.dk/DebianAsia2011";>wiki page</a>.
-The web team is pleased announce that <a
+The web team is pleased to announce that <a
 languages have finished their migration to UTF-8</a>, so the <a
 href="$(HOME)">Debian website</a> is now available for everyone

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