Re: news about debian-women wiki
On 05/30/2010 11:10 PM, David Prévot wrote:
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Le 30/05/2010 13:17, Francesca a écrit :
I think the wording proposition from David it's ok: I only added some
words about todo stuff. :D
Thanks, just added it at the end of current "Other news" stuff. It would
be nice if someone else could confirm it's fine to add this (and
proofread it, thus the cross post with firstname.lastname@example.org). I
wonder if there are not too much "the", and if the invitation wouldn't
be better in "active voice" the way debconf templates are (supposed to
[links are removed in order to make review easier]
- ------------ new stuff -------------
Ana Guerrero announced that the migration of the Debian-Women wiki into
the Debian wiki is now complete. There is still a little bit of work to
do: if you want to contribute, take a look at the migration TODO list.
I'd say "Ana Guerrero announced that the migration of the Debian-Women wiki
into Debian's wiki is now complete. There's still a little work to do :
if you want
to contribute, take a look at the migration TODO list."
Another proposition for the last phrase:
"contribution are welcome, accordingly to the migration TODO list"
"contributions are welcome, according to the migration TODO list."
Il 30/05/2010 16:52, David Prévot ha scritto:
I think it's an error
to link something from a verb  (for accessibility purpose: the user
is supposed to be linked from a meaningful non verbal phrase, since the
link is not doing any action). I use to act this way in the French
translation, is it fine if I modify existing links in the DPN to fit
You're right, David! It seems more correct to not use a verb as a label
for a link.
Just updated the links accordingly, thanks in advance for reviews.
Besides some verbs are neologism and we can't provide a good
translation: e.g. "blogged" not exists in italian, I have to use a
phrase, instead (as in "he wrote in his blog" for " he blogged") so the
label for the link become a phrase...
Actually, it's the same in French, but I usually find it nice, since we
can just use the label "blog" as a link, which is usually fine.
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