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Re: Draft for lenny release announcement

-=| Alexander Reichle-Schmehl, Mon, Feb 09, 2009 at 11:15:23AM +0100 |=-
> <p>Also beginning with Debian GNU/Linux 4.0, the package management system
> has been improved regarding security and efficiency.  Secure APT allows
> the verification of the integrity of packages downloaded from a mirror.

s/4.0/5.0/ ?

> <p>Upgrades to Debian GNU/Linux 5.0 from the previous release, Debian
> GNU/Linux 4.0 codenamed <q>etch</q>, are automatically handled by the
> aptitude package management tool for most configurations, and to a
> certain degree also by the apt-get package management tool.  As 
> always,
> Debian GNU/Linux systems can be upgraded painlessly, in place, without
> any forced downtime, but it is strongly recommended to read the release
> notes for possible issues.  For detailed instructions about installing
> and upgrading Debian GNU/Linux, please see the <a
> href="$(HOME)/releases/lenny/releasenotes">release notes</a>.  Please
> note that the release notes will be further improved and translated to
> additional languages in the coming weeks.</p>

"release notes" is somehow repetitive. Proposed new text:

any forced downtime, but it is strongly recommended to read the <a
href="$(HOME)/releases/lenny/releasenotes">release notes</a> for
possible issues.  Also there, you will find detailed instructions about
installing and upgrading.  ....

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