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Re: Draft for lenny release announcement

On Monday 09 February 2009 11:46 Riku Voipio wrote:
> On Mon, Feb 09, 2009 at 11:15:23AM +0100, Alexander Reichle-Schmehl wrote:
> > <p>Debian GNU/Linux runs on computers ranging from palmtops and handheld
> > systems to supercomputers, and on nearly everything in between.  A total
> > of eleven architectures are supported including:  Sun SPARC (sparc), HP
> > Alpha (alpha), Motorola/IBM PowerPC (powerpc), Intel IA-32 (i386) and
> > IA-64 (ia64), HP PA-RISC (hppa), MIPS (mips, mipsel), ARM (arm), IBM
>                                                              ^^^ armel
> > S/390 (s390) and AMD64 and Intel EM64T (amd64).</p>
> <p> Debian GNU/Linux 5.0 includes the ARM EABI port, armel. The
> new port is provides more efficient usage of modern and future ARM
> processors. The old ARM port (arm) is now depreceated.</p>
> Now someone with better english skills please rewrite that ;)

How about:
<p> Debian GNU/Linux 5.0 (Lenny) will include the new ARM EABI port, 'Armel.' 
This new port provides a more efficient use of both modern and future ARM 
processors. As a result the old ARM port (Arm) has now been depreceated.</p>

You could always say 'improved' instead of 'a more efficient'...


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