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Re: Please proofread next issue of the DPN

Le January 11, 2009 06:15:59 pm Alexander Reichle-Schmehl, vous avez écrit :
> Hi!
> After a short break for the holiday season (and a short break to recover
> from the holiday season), this years first issue of the Debian Project
> News has just been finished.
> If you could proofread it till tomorrow evening, I'll be very glad.
Thanks for the opportunity to review DPN. I reviewed the issue. The only thing 
I'm not satisfied with is the mention of Thiemo Seufer.

IMHO, "Dedicated to Thiemo Seufer." without any explanation is a bit terse. If 
we consider that the topic shouldn't be repeated due to the coverage in a 
dedicated message, we could at least announce the dedication in a full 
sentence. I suggest

Welcome to this year's first issue of DPN, the newsletter for the Debian 
community. This issue is dedicated to Thiemo Seufer, who died on 26 December 
2008 in a tragic car accident. [...]

with a link on "died".

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