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Hello Andre, It's coming along nicely isn't it. The only question I have is about the last sentence: SERPRO also, along with other companies, sponsored the Debian Day Porto Alegre. Can you be more specific about their support I wonder? Were they the biggest sponsor? How many other sponsors were there? Have they a track record of sponsoring FOSS/Debian, or is this their first? When you list, using commas, put a comma before, and so that it indicates that you have just given a list. In the shop I bought apples, bananas, and cabbage. It's not a strict rule by any means, it just indicates clearly that you have given a list. All the best, Jon On Saturday 30 August 2008 2:34:18 pm joão stanojev wrote: > 2008/8/30 Andre Felipe Machado <andremachado@techforce.com.br> > > > Hello, > > I heavily modified the draft [0], turned it more like an inverted > > pyramid, moved and trimmed text, less paragraphs, and invite for > > reviewing and improving it at british english language. > > The target audience is government agencies decision makers. > > Regards. > > Andre Felipe Machado > > > > [0] > > > > http://wiki.debian.org/Teams/Publicity/DebianTimesTeam/Drafts/SerproChose > >DebianAndCollaborate > > > > > > -- > > To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-publicity-request@lists.debian.org > > with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact > > listmaster@lists.debian.org > > Por favor,reentero mensagens anteriores,NO SPEAKING ENGLISH,favor enviar > > linguagem Portugues (PT) Brasil,Sem mais contando com colaboração > > constumeira,fiquem com Deus. |