Re: [DRAFT FOR REVIEW]Debian GNU/Linux Suite Telecentro: millions of users for the digital society
I just updated the draft  with your suggestions and some more.
Please, review, improve and edit the draft  yourself at the wiki.
The paragraph citing Ocara was modified for a more clear text.
There is a link to "telecentres" explanation.
We need more british language proofreaders examining the texts.