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Re: Project News: The debimg project

Hello, Julian
Nice idea!
Please, rewrite your text a bit, compressing it to fewer words. Also,
there is some redundance [1].
How could you describe your project key advantages in 15 seconds and
fewest words? (imagine being read by one with very few time allocated to
the task)
Subscribers will find details at your wiki page.
You could add the redacted text yourself at the DPN current draft [0].
Andre Felipe

[0] http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews/Issues/Current
[1] http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews/Guidelines

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