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Re: [times] birthday announcement



On Tue, 15 Aug 2006, Andreas Barth wrote:
| A lot has happened since Ian's first mail: The project is lead by its
                                                            ----
This should be 'led', or perhaps 'headed up' to avoid the redundancy.

| ninth leader and more than a thousand developers are registered to
| work voluntarily on one of the largest distributions of Free Software.

This would then become:

"The project is headed up by its ninth leader, and more than a thousand 
developers are registered to work voluntarily on one of the largest 
distributions of Free Software."

-Noel

---Noel Rosenberg
---noel@gamelogic.com
---"Not the handsome actor...
---    who plays the hero's role." - _Nobody's Hero_ - Rush



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