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Bug#643932: FTP Team related changes



Le Fri, Sep 30, 2011 at 11:18:27PM +0200, Luca Falavigna a écrit :
> @@ -1972,7 +1972,7 @@
>  While preparing the patch, you should better be aware of any package-specific
>  practices that the maintainer might be using. Taking them into account reduces
>  the burden of getting your changes integrated back in the normal package
> -workflow and thus increases the possibilities that that will happen. A good
> +workflow and thus increases the possibilities that will happen. A good
>  place where to look for for possible package-specific practices is
>  <ulink url="&url-debian-policy;ch-source.html#s-readmesource"><filename>debian/README.source</filename></ulink>.
>  </para>

Hi Luca,

I am not sure that this English correction is correct.  Even if ‘that that’
looks inelegant, it is not an accidental repetition, it is more like ‘that it’,
or ‘that this’.  Perhaps a native speaker can help to reword better.

Cheers,

-- 
Charles Plessy
Tsurumi, Kanagawa, Japan



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