On Sat, 2010-08-28 at 09:08 +0200, Guillem Jover wrote: > Source: debian-policy > Source-Version: 3.9.1.0 > Severity: wishlist > Tags: patch > X-Debbugs-CC: debian-hurd@lists.debian.org > > Hi! > > Here's a draft patch to add an FHS exception for the two top-level > directories GNU/Hurd uses. Hi Guillem, I would change the text around a little to add that to the beginning of the paragraph, something like: On GNU/Hurd systems the <file>/hurd</file> and <file>/servers</file> directories are also allowed in the root filesystem. <footnote>These directories are used to store translators and as a set of standard names for mount points respectively.</footnote> Ordering the words in this way means the reader can decide it's applicability much faster. Perhaps splitting the footnote into two footnotes might help also: ... <file>/hurd</file><footnote>Used to store translators.</footnote> and <file>/servers</file><footnote>Used as a set of standard names for mount points.</footnote> ... > It might make sense to merge with the /sys and /selinux paragraph, and > the footnote might need to be clarified probably. It might, although I think starting the paragraph with "On GNU/Hurd ..." might make it clearer when it stands on it's own. Regards, Andrew McMillan. -- ------------------------------------------------------------------------ andrew (AT) morphoss (DOT) com +64(272)DEBIAN The difference between a crazy person and an intelligent one is that the crazy one doesn't realize what makes sense in the world. -- Linus Torvalds ------------------------------------------------------------------------
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