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Bug#555977: debian-policy: Constraints on binary package control files



Guillem Jover <guillem@debian.org> writes:

> Here's a review from a non-native speaker.

Thank you!

> On Sat, 2010-07-03 at 17:40:49 -0700, Russ Allbery wrote:

>> +	A <tt>.deb</tt> package contains two sets of files: a set of files
>> +	to installed on the system when the package is installed, and a

> /files to install/, instead of /files to be installed/ given that
> there's an “installed” later on?

Yes, plus that's more grammatical.

>> +	There is an unfortunately collision of terminology here between

> /There is an unfortunate collision/ or /There is unfortunately a
> collision/?

Good call.  Both changes made in my version.

-- 
Russ Allbery (rra@debian.org)               <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>



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