Bug#555977: debian-policy: Constraints on binary package control files
Guillem Jover <guillem@debian.org> writes:
> Here's a review from a non-native speaker.
Thank you!
> On Sat, 2010-07-03 at 17:40:49 -0700, Russ Allbery wrote:
>> + A <tt>.deb</tt> package contains two sets of files: a set of files
>> + to installed on the system when the package is installed, and a
> /files to install/, instead of /files to be installed/ given that
> there's an “installed” later on?
Yes, plus that's more grammatical.
>> + There is an unfortunately collision of terminology here between
> /There is an unfortunate collision/ or /There is unfortunately a
> collision/?
Good call. Both changes made in my version.
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Russ Allbery (rra@debian.org) <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>
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