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minor edits



Hi,

I've just completed a first reading of the Debian Policy Manual (version
3.8.3.0, 2009-08-16). Below are some suggestions for minor edits. If it
would be better to send them in some other form, please let me know.

Thanks,
Eric Rz.


Footnote 1 this/these interface(s) disagreement

Footnote 48 s/a shared libs may/a shared lib may/

4.5 s/relayed/related/

5.6.6 s/that it is that/it is that/

5.6.8 s/information how/information on how/

5.6.11 s/or the all four/or all four/

5.6.18 s/of blank line)./of a blank line)./

6.6 3.1.2. s/left in an "Half-Installed"/left in a "Half-Installed"/  (also occurs 2x in 5.2. and 6.8 3.)
    3.2.   s/the packages is/the package is/

8.6.2 s/adding -tudeb as option/adding the -tudeb option/

9.1.2 s/Note,/Note/

9.1.3 s/should not owned/should not be owned/

10.2 reference to LinuxThreads ... should it be NPTL?

11.8.6 s/which must registered/which must be registered/


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