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Bug#422552: marked as done (Minor typos and wording suggestions)



Your message dated Wed, 04 Jun 2008 23:32:03 +0000
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and subject line Bug#422552: fixed in debian-policy 3.8.0.0
has caused the Debian Bug report #422552,
regarding Minor typos and wording suggestions
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Package: debian-policy
Version: 3.7.2.2
Severity: minor

Hi!

While reading the Debian policy I found some minor things I'd like to see
improved. I'm refering to the PDF dated 2006-10-02, so page numbers might be
slightly inaccurate, please bear with me.

- Page 8, 2.5 Priorities, Paragraph on "required": s/Removing an required/Removing a required/

- Page 9, 2.5 Priorities, Paragraph on "extra": This is not too nice read, I'd
  suggest the following wording:
  extra For one, this contains all packages that conflict with others of priority
  required, important, standard or optional. Furthermore it is used for packages
  that are only likely to be useful if you already know what they are or
  packages that have specialized requirements.

- Page 39, 6.1, second paragraph: ... and must not be not world-writable; either
  this is a major error as it means that the files _must be_ world-writable, or
  it should be reworded to must be world-writable. Then it would deserve some
  explanation because usually one would never want world-writable scripts.

- Page 39, 6.1, third paragraph, first line: ... exit status from these scripts.
  ...  should read ... exit status of these scripts. ...

- Page 39, 6.1, fourth paragraph: ... (this is usually true when writing shell
  scripts, in fact). - This is the Debian policy, I think this is not the point
  for giving general advice (or even opinions of the authors, even though I do
  agree here). Rather, the reader should be referred to 10.4, Scripts, where
  this is discussed appropriately.

- Page 40, 6.1, first paragraph of page 40: ... These considerations really
  apply to all shell scripts. - Again, this is the Debian policy, not the point
  for general advice, refer to 10.4.

- Page 40, 6.2, heading: Maintainer scripts Idempotency - idempotency should be
  lowercase here.

- Page 40, 6.3: ... redirected into a pipe for ... ; this should be ... redirected
  to a pipe for ...

- Page 40, 64: ... system looks for the exit status ... ; this should be ...
  system looks at the exit status ...

- Page 41, 6.6, 1, 2: ... If this does not work, the error unwind: -- so - what,
  there seems to be some part of the sentence missing.


Ok, finally, that's it for now. If some of my points are valid, minor may not be
an appropriate severity anymore...

Best regards,
Michael


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Source: debian-policy
Source-Version: 3.8.0.0

We believe that the bug you reported is fixed in the latest version of
debian-policy, which is due to be installed in the Debian FTP archive:

debian-policy_3.8.0.0.dsc
  to pool/main/d/debian-policy/debian-policy_3.8.0.0.dsc
debian-policy_3.8.0.0.tar.gz
  to pool/main/d/debian-policy/debian-policy_3.8.0.0.tar.gz
debian-policy_3.8.0.0_all.deb
  to pool/main/d/debian-policy/debian-policy_3.8.0.0_all.deb



A summary of the changes between this version and the previous one is
attached.

Thank you for reporting the bug, which will now be closed.  If you
have further comments please address them to 422552@bugs.debian.org,
and the maintainer will reopen the bug report if appropriate.

Debian distribution maintenance software
pp.
Russ Allbery <rra@debian.org> (supplier of updated debian-policy package)

(This message was generated automatically at their request; if you
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Format: 1.8
Date: Wed, 04 Jun 2008 15:53:27 -0700
Source: debian-policy
Binary: debian-policy
Architecture: source all
Version: 3.8.0.0
Distribution: unstable
Urgency: low
Maintainer: Debian Policy List <debian-policy@lists.debian.org>
Changed-By: Russ Allbery <rra@debian.org>
Description: 
 debian-policy - Debian Policy Manual and related documents
Closes: 65577 186700 209008 250202 291460 367984 379150 392362 403391 422552 430649 431813 440420 442070 452105 455602 458910 473761 475731 480551 481640 481954
Changes: 
 debian-policy (3.8.0.0) unstable; urgency=low
 .
   * Bug fix: "[PROPOSAL] "debian/README.source" file for packages with
     non-trivial source", thanks to Wouter Verhelst, Jörg Sommer, Colin Watson,
     and Junichi Uekawa                                       (Closes: #250202).
   * Bug fix: "[AMENDMENT 11/02/2008] Manual page encoding", thanks to
     Colin Watson                                             (Closes: #440420).
   * Bug fix: "[PROPOSAL] common interface for parallel building in
     DEB_BUILD_OPTIONS", thanks to Loïc Minier, Peter Samuelson, and Robert
     Millan                                                   (Closes: #209008).
   * Bug fix: "Please clarify splitting/syntax of DEB_BUILD_OPTIONS", thanks to
     Loïc Minier, Peter Samuelson, Robert Millan, and Guillem Jover
                                                              (Closes: #430649).
   * Bug fix: "Documentation for Breaks in dpkg", thanks to Ian Jackson
                                                              (Closes: #379150).
   * Bug fix: "support for wrapped Uploaders should now be mandatory"
                                                              (Closes: #431813).
   * Bug fix: "[PROPOSAL] Add should not embed code from other packages",
     thanks to Neil McGovern, Colin Watson, Bill Allombert, Steve Langasek,
     Kurt Roeckx, and others                                  (Closes: #392362).
   * Bug fix: "Homepage field in debian/control undocumented", thanks to
     Mario Iseli                                              (Closes: #452105).
   * Bug fix: "Policy inconsistent with reality: base subsection no longer
     used", thanks to Magnus Holmgren, Bernd Zeimetz, and Colin Watson
                                                              (Closes: #442070).
   * Bug fix: "Inclusion of Apache Software License versions in
     /usr/share/common-licenses", thanks to Barry Hawkins     (Closes: #291460).
   * Bug fix: "[Amended] copyright should include notice if a package is
     not a part of Debian distribution", thanks to Taketoshi Sano
                                                              (Closes: #65577).
   * Bug fix: "scripts as configuration files: should vs. must", thanks to Frank
     Küster                                                   (Closes: #403391).
   * Bug fix: "debconf specification should allow underscores in template
     names", thanks to Colin Watson                           (Closes: #473761).
   * Bug fix: "clarify handling of run-time and compile-time support programs",
     thanks to Goswin Brederlow and Raphael Hertzog           (Closes: #367984).
   * Policy: better document version ranking and empty Debian revisions
     Wording: Russ Allbery <rra@debian.org>
     Seconded: Raphaël Hertzog <hertzog@debian.org>
     Seconded: Manoj Srivastava <srivasta@debian.org>
     Seconded: Guillem Jover <guillem@debian.org>
     Closes: #186700, #458910
   * Policy: remove obsolete app-defaults and Xresources provisions
     Wording: Julien Cristau <jcristau@debian.org>
     Seconded: Russ Allbery <rra@debian.org>
     Closes: #480551
   * Bug fix: "Examples of dpkg frontends should mention apt now", thanks
     to Josh Triplett                                         (Closes: #455602).
   * Bug fix: "Minor typos and wording suggestions", thanks to Michael
     Tautschnig                                               (Closes: #422552).
   * Bug fix: "substvar reference moved from dpkg-source(1) to
     deb-substvars(5)", thanks to Ian Beckwith                (Closes: #475731).
   * Policy: bugs fixed in NMUs are now closed rather than marked fixed
     Wording: Russ Allbery <rra@debian.org> (thanks, Sandro Tosi)
     Closes: #481640
   * Policy: C.1.4, C.1.8: minor typos
     Wording: Sandro Tosi <matrixhasu@gmail.com>
     Closes: #481954
   * Remove the now-obsolete policy-process document.
   * Add an md5sums control file.
   * Add Vcs-Browser and Vcs-Git control fields.
   * Remove build system support for FHS 2.1 and FSSTND, mostly commented out.
   * Remove more temporary files created by the build.
   * Remove the FSSTND license from debian/copyright; no FSSTND files are
     currently part of policy.
   * Update FHS copyright dates in debian/copyright.
   * Standardize the spacing around headings in upgrading-checklist.html.
   * Remove old ChangeLog files and metadata headers in maintainer scripts
     and debian/rules.
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