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Bug#905906: RFS: hinawa-utils/0.1.0-1 [ITP]



On Sat, 8 Sep 2018 20:30:09 +0900
Kentaro Hayashi <hayashi@clear-code.com> wrote:
> Could you review it again, @henrich?

> Description: Commandline utility to control Audio and Music units on FireWire(IEEE1394)

 "Utilities to control Audio and Music units on FireWire (IEEE1394)"


>  This package contains the following CUI tools.

 You should repeat package overview at first.
 
 "hinawa-utils are utilities to control Audio and Music units on FireWire (IEEE1394) and it contains below command line tools."

>   * hinawa-bebob-parser
>      * Plug structure parser for BeBoB firmware
>   * hinawa-config-rom-printer
>      * A lexer/parser of configuration ROM on FireWire

 It would be better to describe below style

" * hinawa-bebob-parser: Plug structure parser for BeBoB firmware
  * hinawa-config-rom-printer: A lexer/parser of configuration ROM on FireWire"

 or 

  * foobar
    - blablabla

-- 
Regards,

 Hideki Yamane     henrich @ debian.org/iijmio-mail.jp


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