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Re: Debian Live

W. Martin Borgert wrote:
> Can somebody update/correct the Debian live paragraph in the
> release notes, please? See #493931. Currently it says:
> <section id="live-cd" condition="fixme">
> <title>Debian Live-CD</title>
> <programlisting condition="fixme">TODO: What's the state?</programlisting>
> <para>
> With &releasename; Debian presents an official Debian live
> CD.<indexterm><primary>Live CD</primary></indexterm> Please look at
> <ulink url="http://wiki.debian.org/LiveCD"/> and <ulink
> url="http://wiki.debian.org/DebianLive"/> for further information.
> </para>
> </section>

I suggest to replace it with the following:

<section id="live">
<title>Debian Live</title>
With &releasename; Debian presents official Live systems for the amd64
and i386 architectures.
A Debian Live system is a Debian system that can be booted directly from
removable media (CD-ROMs, DVDs, USB keys) from another computer over the
network without the need of installation. The images were produced by a
tool named <ulink
url="http://packages.debian.org/live-helper";>live-helper</ulink>, which
allows to easily create own custom live images. More information about
the Debian Live project can be found at <ulink
url="http://debian-live.alioth.debian.org/"; />.

improvements welcome.

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