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Re: Bug#200411: www.debian.org: confusing description of non-US sections



On Tue, Jul 08, 2003 at 06:15:35AM -0700, Matt Kraai wrote:
> On Tue, Jul 08, 2003 at 03:01:17AM -0500, Branden Robinson wrote:
> [snip]
> > 
> > s/encryption software packages/& that are not exempted from the export
> > control procedure that is used for packages in Main/
> 
> I find this last change confusing.  If they are "not exempted"
> from the export control procedure, it should apply to them.  How
> about
> 
>  They cannot be exported from the U.S. because they are encryption
>  software packages that are not covered by the export control
>  procedure that is used for packages in Main...
> 
> instead?

I agree.  When I started writing it I was thinking about the
applicability of the U.S. export control regulations themselves, but
that's not really what we care about directly.

I do suggest s/covered/handled/, thought.

> Thanks for reviewing this.

No problem!

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