On Sat, Feb 15, 2014 at 10:39:59PM +0100, Lev Lamberov wrote:
...
> -<p>The Debian project is pleased to announce the ninth update of its
> -oldstable distribution Debian <release> (codename <q><codename></q>).
> -This update mainly adds corrections for security problems to the oldstable
> -release, along with a few adjustments for serious problems. Security advisories
> -were already published separately and are referenced where available.</p>
> -
> -<p>Please note that this update does not constitute a new version of Debian
> -<release> but only updates some of the packages included. There is
> -no need to throw away old <q><codename></q> CDs or DVDs but only to update
> -via an up-to-date Debian mirror after an installation, to cause any out of
> -date packages to be updated.</p>
> -
> -<p>Those who frequently install updates from security.debian.org won't have
> -to update many packages and most updates from security.debian.org are
> -included in this update.</p>
> -
> -<p>New installation media and CD and DVD images containing updated packages
> -will be available soon at the regular locations.</p>
> -
> -<p>Upgrading to this revision online is usually done by pointing the
> -aptitude (or apt) package tool (see the sources.list(5) manual page) to
> -one of Debian's many FTP or HTTP mirrors. A comprehensive list of
> -mirrors is available at:</p>
> +<p>Проект Debian с радостью сообщает о девятом обновлении своего
> +предыдущего стабильного выпуска Debian <release> (кодовое имя <q><codename></q>).
> +Это обновление, в основном, содержит исправления проблем безопасности предыдущего стабильного
На мой взгляд, здесь не должно быть запятых вокруг "в основном".
...
> -<p>oldstable distribution information (release notes, errata etc.):</p>
> +<p>Информация о предыдущем стабильном выпуске (информация о выпуске, известные ошибки и т.д.):</p>
Между буквами в "т. д." должен быть пробел, т. к. каждая буква просто
является сокращением слова.
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