Re: [ITT] wml://announcements/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml

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Subject: Re: [ITT] wml://announcements/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml
From: Leandro Cunha <leandrocunha016@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 10 Jun 2023 14:14:07 -0300
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Olá Paulo e Charles,

On Sat, Jun 10, 2023 at 12:34 PM Carlos Henrique Lima Melara
<charlesmelara@riseup.net> wrote:
>
> Bom dia, Paulo e Leandro.
>
> On Sat, Jun 10, 2023 at 11:45:39AM -0300, Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana wrote:
> > Leandro,
> >
> > Agora a pouco subi uma nova versão do arquivo em inglês pq ele sofreu
> > algumas alterações na última hora.
> >
> > https://salsa.debian.org/publicity-team/announcements/-/blob/master/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml
> >
> > Então você vai precisar revisar a sua tradução antes de mandar pra cá a
> > versão final.
>
> O diff é bem pequeno, vejam:
>
> diff --git a/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml b/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml
> index 898cc8b..b2777ea 100644
> --- a/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml
> +++ b/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml
> @@ -177,17 +177,11 @@ the Debian website.
>  </p>
>
>  <p>
> -To install Debian 12 <q>bookworm</q> directly onto your
> -computer's hard disk you can choose from a variety of installation media
> -such as Blu-ray Disc, DVD, CD, USB stick, or via a network connection.
> -Several desktop environments &mdash; Cinnamon, GNOME, KDE Plasma Desktop and
> -Applications, LXDE, LXQt, MATE and Xfce &mdash; may be installed through those
> -images.
> -In addition, <q>multi-architecture</q> CDs are available which support
> -installation from a choice of architectures from a single disc. Or you can
> -always create bootable USB installation media
> -(see the <a href="$(HOME)/releases/bookworm/installmanual">Installation Guide</a>
> -for more details).
> +To install Debian 12 <q>bookworm</q> directly onto your computer's storage
> +device you can choose from a variety of installation media types to <a href="https://www.debian.org/download";>Download</a>
> +such as: Blu-ray Disc, DVD, CD, USB stick, or via a network connection.
> +
> +See the <a href="$(HOME)/releases/bookworm/installmanual">Installation Guide</a> for more details.
>  </p>
>
>  # Translators: some text taken from:
>
>  Então, se quiser mandar a tradução que havia feito, podemos adicionar
>  essas alterações na revisão.
>
>  Abraços,
>  Charles

Eu vou adicionar esta parte e ontem adicionei uma outra parte que mudou.
Um dos motivos que está levando eu segurar um pouco esta tradução.

-- 
Cheers,
Leandro Cunha

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References:
- [ITT] wml://announcements/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml
  - From: Leandro Cunha <leandrocunha016@gmail.com>
- Re: [ITT] wml://announcements/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml
  - From: Paulo Henrique de Lima Santana <phls@debian.org>
- Re: [ITT] wml://announcements/pt/drafts/bookworm-release.wml
  - From: Carlos Henrique Lima Melara <charlesmelara@riseup.net>

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