Re: [RFR] webwml://www.debian.org/security/2006/dsa-114{0,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9}.wml

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Subject: Re: [RFR] webwml://www.debian.org/security/2006/dsa-114{0,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9}.wml
From: "stephane blondon" <stephane.blondon@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 20 Aug 2006 13:40:17 +0200
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Une suggestion de reformulation pour dsa-1143.wml.

--
Stephane.

--- dsa-1143.origine.wml	2006-08-20 13:19:25.000000000 +0200
+++ dsa-1143.stephane.wml	2006-08-20 13:24:42.000000000 +0200
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 <define-tag description>Erreur de programmation</define-tag>
 <define-tag moreinfo>
 <p>
-Justin Winschief et Andrew Steets ont dÃ©couvert un bogue dans dhcp, un serveur
-DHCP qui assigne automatiquement des adresses IP, l'application serveur
-pourrait se couper subitement.
+Justin Winschief et Andrew Steets ont dÃ©couvert un bogue dans dhcp, le serveur
+qui attribue des adresses IP automatiquement, l'application serveur
+pourrait se couper de maniÃ¨re impromptue.
 </p>
 
 <p>

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- [RFR] webwml://www.debian.org/security/2006/dsa-114{0,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9}.wml
  - From: Nicolas Bertolissio <nico.bertol.no@spamfree.fr>

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