Re: [cdrom-detect] Change template proposal
Hi,
Justin B Rye <justin.byam.rye@gmail.com> wrote:
> > "You may want to switch to the shell on the second terminal (CLTR+ALT+F2 in the "
> > "graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the "
> > "available devices in /dev with \"ls /dev\". You can return to this screen "
> > "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1."
> ^^^^^^^^^^
> >
> >
> > Comments?
>
> "Respective" is never ever a conjunction in English. Just say "or".
>
> And it's CTRL, not CLTR.
john doe <johndoe65534@mail.com> wrote:
> > "You may want to switch to the shell on the second terminal (CLTR+ALT+F2 in the "
> > "graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the "
> > "available devices in /dev with \"ls /dev\". You can return to this screen "
> > "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1."
> >
>
> "> by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 respective ALT+F1."
>
> At the very least the above line should be:
>
> "by pressing CLTR+ALT+F5 and ALT+F1 respectively."
Summarizing your comments into one patch, would this be ok?
diff --git a/debian/cdrom-detect.templates b/debian/cdrom-detect.templates
index 2058b0b..ba50e89 100644
--- a/debian/cdrom-detect.templates
+++ b/debian/cdrom-detect.templates
@@ -55,9 +55,10 @@ _Description: Device file for accessing the installation media:
the device file that should be used. Non-standard CD-ROM drives use
non-standard device files (such as /dev/mcdx).
.
- You may switch to the shell on the second terminal (ALT+F2) to check the
+ You may want switch to the shell on the second terminal (CTRL+ALT+F2 in the
+ graphical installer, ALT+F2 for the text-based variant) to check the
available devices in /dev with "ls /dev". You can return to this screen
- by pressing ALT+F1.
+ by pressing CTRL+ALT+F5 or ALT+F1 respectively.
Template: cdrom-detect/cdrom_fs
Type: string
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