Bug#877949: Package description: do you really mean "offload"?
Package: iscsiuio
Version: 2.0.874-3~deb9u1
Severity: wishlist
X-Debbugs-CC: debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org
Dear Maintainers,
the last paragraph of the package description [1] and its short
description sound strange to me.
"This package is required to offload iSCSI onto these devices."
Not being a native English speaker, I found [2]. Thus I believe that
"offload" and "onto" don't fit together. And I'm wondering what would
be a better wording.
Perhaps
"You need this package|software to make these devices work with iSCSI"?
Hopyfully some native speaker has a better suggestion for this sentence
and the short description.
Kind regards,
Martin
[1] http://sources.debian.net/src/open-iscsi/2.0.874-4/debian/control/
[2]
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/de/worterbuch/englisch/offload#translations
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