Re: Last part of the proposed changes to debian-faq
Hi,
Beatrice Torracca <beatricet@libero.it> wrote:
> <p>You are advised not to use the Debian forums (either mailing lists or IRC)
> -for help as people might advice you thinking that you are running a Debian
> +for help as people might advise you thinking that you are running a Debian
> system and the "fixes" they provide might not be suited to what you are
> running. They might even worsen the problem you are facing.
Isn't this phrase somewhat confused?
"You are advised not to use the Debian forums for help as people might advise
you thinking that you are running a Debian system."
I would propose something like:
"You are advised not to use the Debian forums for help as people which are
trying to help you, might think that you are running a Debian system."
> @@ -85,7 +92,7 @@
> <item>FreeBSD: provided through the <em/kfreebsd-amd64/ and
> <em/kfreebsd-i386/ ports, for 64-bit PCs and 32-bit PCs respectively. These
> ports were first released in Debian 6.0 Squeeze as a <em/technology preview/.
> -
> +However they were not part of the Debian 8.0 Jessie release.
> </list>
8.0 -> 8
Holger
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