Re: Review request: debian-security-support/earlyend
Santiago Ruano Rincón wrote:
> Dear debian-l10n-english,
>
> I had forgotten to add the debconf template for a new feature of
> debian-security-support. Could you please review it?
>
> The full file is at:
>
> https://anonscm.debian.org/cgit/collab-maint/debian-security-support.git/tree/debian/debian-security-support.templates?id=967bc23990e47dd644582cf597121d2b00f531e2
>
> And this is the change:
>
> diff --git a/debian/debian-security-support.templates b/debian/debian-security-support.templates
> index 4f8c0f4..2ed2b89 100644
> --- a/debian/debian-security-support.templates
> +++ b/debian/debian-security-support.templates
> @@ -28,3 +28,14 @@ _Description: Limited security support for one or more packages
> The following packages found on this system are affected by this:
> .
> ${MESSAGE}
> +
> +Template: debian-security-support/earlyend
> +Type: text
> +#flag:translate!:4
> +_Description: Future end of support for one or more packages
> + Unfortunately, it will be needed to end security support for some
> + packages before the end of the regular security maintenance life cycle.
For some reason I can't put my finger on, "needed" doesn't work in
this sort of impersonal construction - use "necessary".
> + .
> + The following packages found on this system are affected by this:"
^
Surplus punctuation.
> + .
> + ${MESSAGE}
Patch and revised version attached.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
# team
#
# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
# debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org for advice.
#
# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
Template: debian-security-support/ended
Type: text
#flag:translate!:4
_Description: Ended security support for one or more packages
Unfortunately, it has been necessary to end security support for some
packages before the end of the regular security maintenance life cycle.
.
The following packages found on this system are affected by this:
.
${MESSAGE}
Template: debian-security-support/limited
Type: text
#flag:translate!:4
_Description: Limited security support for one or more packages
Unfortunately, it has been necessary to limit security support for some
packages.
.
The following packages found on this system are affected by this:
.
${MESSAGE}
Template: debian-security-support/earlyend
Type: text
#flag:translate!:4
_Description: Future end of support for one or more packages
Unfortunately, it will be necessary to end security support for some
packages before the end of the regular security maintenance life cycle.
.
The following packages found on this system are affected by this:
.
${MESSAGE}
--- debian-security-support.templates.old 2016-05-11 22:57:08.734571880 +0100
+++ debian-security-support.templates 2016-05-11 23:10:02.860062230 +0100
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@
Type: text
#flag:translate!:4
_Description: Future end of support for one or more packages
- Unfortunately, it will be needed to end security support for some
+ Unfortunately, it will be necessary to end security support for some
packages before the end of the regular security maintenance life cycle.
.
- The following packages found on this system are affected by this:"
+ The following packages found on this system are affected by this:
.
${MESSAGE}
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