Re: [LCFC] templates://whatmaps/{templates}

[Justin B Rye <justin.byam.rye@gmail.com>]

victory wrote:
>> Template: whatmaps/enable_service_restarts
>> Type: boolean
>> Default: false
>> _Description: Automatically restart services after library security updates?
>>  Services need to be restarted to benefit from updates of shared libraries they
>>  depend on. Otherwise they remain vulnerable to security bugs fixed in these
>>  updates.
> 
> how about something like this:
> s/Otherwise/Until restarting, the services will/

Well, I suppose "Otherwise" is a less common word, but "Until
restarting" strikes me as unidiomatic for reasons I can't put my
finger on.  You can say "Until being restarted" or "Until restarted",
but I don't much like those either - going via a passive seems
unlikely to simplify things.

Maybe "Until then, they/the services will remain vulnerable..."?

(Or stick to "Otherwise".)
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package