Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the arb source package.
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Rationale:
--- arb.old/debian/arb-common.templates 2014-09-16 22:40:56.241801838 +0200
+++ arb/debian/arb-common.templates 2014-09-23 06:50:07.253239452 +0200
@@ -1,9 +1,10 @@
Template: arb/group
Type: multiselect
Choices: ${users}
-_Description: ARB PT-server administrators
+_Description: ARB PT-server administrators:
ARB is preconfigured via /etc/arb/arb_tcp.dat with three private PT servers
for each user as well as three global PT servers accessible by all users.
.
- Only members of the system group "arb" will be able to build and update
- the shared PT servers. This setting configures the group members.
+ Only members of the "arb" system group will be able to build and update
+ the shared PT servers. Please enter the login names for these
+ privileged users.
Sadly, I have no idea of what a "PT server" is and can't provide good
suggestions. At minimum jargon should be reduced and the acronym
developed somewhere.
The proposed changes are therefore only debian-l10n-english
house-style wording.....
--- arb.old/debian/control 2014-09-16 22:40:56.241801838 +0200
+++ arb/debian/control 2014-09-23 06:53:38.281028981 +0200
@@ -51,12 +51,12 @@
Suggests: arb-database,
gnuplot,
gv
-Description: Graphical suite for phylogenetic sequence analysis
- The ARB software is a graphically oriented package comprising various tools
+Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - main program
+ The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
- user defined criteria.
+ user-defined criteria.
.
The ARB project (latin, "arbor"=tree) is a joint initiative of the Lehrstuhl
fuer Mikrobiologie http://www.mikro.biologie.tu-muenchen.de/ and the
use dashes in some places.....
Also reduce the package description by dropping "graphical suite"
(this is explained in the long description and is anyway weired for
the packages that do not provide graphical-oriented parts such as
libraries or documentation.
@@ -69,12 +69,12 @@
Depends: ${misc:Depends},
${shlibs:Depends}
Recommends: arb
-Description: Graphical suite for phylogenetic sequence analysis (libraries)
- The ARB software is a graphically oriented package comprising various tools
+Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - libraries
This change (and other similar changes is the "standard" way we always
propose for derived packages...
Template: arb/group
Type: multiselect
Choices: ${users}
_Description: ARB PT-server administrators:
ARB is preconfigured via /etc/arb/arb_tcp.dat with three private PT servers
for each user as well as three global PT servers accessible by all users.
.
Only members of the "arb" system group will be able to build and update
the shared PT servers. Please enter the login names for these
privileged users.
--- arb.old/debian/arb-common.templates 2014-09-16 22:40:56.241801838 +0200
+++ arb/debian/arb-common.templates 2014-09-23 06:50:07.253239452 +0200
@@ -1,9 +1,10 @@
Template: arb/group
Type: multiselect
Choices: ${users}
-_Description: ARB PT-server administrators
+_Description: ARB PT-server administrators:
ARB is preconfigured via /etc/arb/arb_tcp.dat with three private PT servers
for each user as well as three global PT servers accessible by all users.
.
- Only members of the system group "arb" will be able to build and update
- the shared PT servers. This setting configures the group members.
+ Only members of the "arb" system group will be able to build and update
+ the shared PT servers. Please enter the login names for these
+ privileged users.
--- arb.old/debian/control 2014-09-16 22:40:56.241801838 +0200
+++ arb/debian/control 2014-09-23 06:53:38.281028981 +0200
@@ -51,12 +51,12 @@
Suggests: arb-database,
gnuplot,
gv
-Description: Graphical suite for phylogenetic sequence analysis
- The ARB software is a graphically oriented package comprising various tools
+Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - main program
+ The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
- user defined criteria.
+ user-defined criteria.
.
The ARB project (latin, "arbor"=tree) is a joint initiative of the Lehrstuhl
fuer Mikrobiologie http://www.mikro.biologie.tu-muenchen.de/ and the
@@ -69,12 +69,12 @@
Depends: ${misc:Depends},
${shlibs:Depends}
Recommends: arb
-Description: Graphical suite for phylogenetic sequence analysis (libraries)
- The ARB software is a graphically oriented package comprising various tools
+Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - libraries
+ The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
- user defined criteria.
+ user-defined criteria.
.
The ARB project (latin, "arbor"=tree) is a joint initiative of the Lehrstuhl
fuer Mikrobiologie http://www.mikro.biologie.tu-muenchen.de/ and the
@@ -82,19 +82,19 @@
http://wwwbode.informatik.tu-muenchen.de/ of the Technical University
of Munich.
.
- This package contains the dynamic libraries which are used by arb.
+ This package provides the dynamic libraries which are used by Arb.
Package: libarb-dev
Architecture: amd64 i386 kfreebsd-i386 kfreebsd-amd64
Section: non-free/libdevel
Depends: libarb (= ${binary:Version}),
${misc:Depends}
-Description: Graphical suite for phylogenetic sequence analysis (development files)
- The ARB software is a graphically oriented package comprising various tools
+Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - development files
+ The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
- user defined criteria.
+ user-defined criteria.
.
The ARB project (latin, "arbor"=tree) is a joint initiative of the Lehrstuhl
fuer Mikrobiologie http://www.mikro.biologie.tu-muenchen.de/ and the
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
http://wwwbode.informatik.tu-muenchen.de/ of the Technical University
of Munich.
.
- This package contains headers and static libs needed to link against libARBDB.
+ This package provides headers and static libs needed to link against libARBDB.
Package: arb-common
Architecture: all
@@ -114,14 +114,14 @@
${misc:Depends},
${perl:Depends}
Recommends: arb
-Description: Graphical suite for phylogenetic sequence analysis (common files)
- The ARB software is a graphically oriented package comprising various tools
+Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - common files
+ The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
- user defined criteria.
+ user-defined criteria.
.
- This package contains the architecture independent scripts of Arb.
+ This package provides the architecture independent scripts of Arb.
Package: arb-doc
Architecture: all
@@ -130,11 +130,11 @@
gv | postscript-viewer,
${misc:Depends}
Suggests: arb
-Description: Graphical suite for phylogenetic sequence analysis (documentation)
- The ARB software is a graphically oriented package comprising various tools
+Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - documentation
+ The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
- user defined criteria.
+ user-defined criteria.
.
- This package contains the documentation for the package arb.
+ This package provides the documentation for Arb.
Source: arb
Maintainer: Debian Med Packaging Team <debian-med-packaging@lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders: Andreas Tille <tille@debian.org>,
Elmar Pruesse <elmar@pruesse.net>
Section: non-free/science
XS-Autobuild: yes
Priority: optional
Build-Depends: chrpath,
debhelper (>= 9),
freeglut3-dev | libglu-dev,
libbio-perl-perl,
libglew-dev,
libglib2.0-dev,
libglw1-mesa-dev,
libglu1-mesa-dev,
libmotif-dev,
libpng-dev,
libtiff-dev,
libxaw7-dev,
libxml2-utils,
libxpm-dev,
lynx,
time,
perl-doc,
xsltproc,
xutils-dev
Standards-Version: 3.9.5
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/debian-med/trunk/packages/arb/trunk/
Vcs-Svn: svn://anonscm.debian.org/debian-med/trunk/packages/arb/trunk/
Homepage: http://www.arb-home.de/
Package: arb
Architecture: amd64 i386 kfreebsd-i386 kfreebsd-amd64
Depends: arb-common (= ${source:Version}),
fastdnaml,
libarb (= ${binary:Version}),
openssh-client,
mafft,
mrbayes,
phylip,
phyml,
raxml,
readseq,
transfig,
tree-puzzle,
xdg-utils,
${misc:Depends},
${shlibs:Depends}
Recommends: bioperl,
xfig
Suggests: arb-database,
gnuplot,
gv
Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - main program
The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
user-defined criteria.
.
The ARB project (latin, "arbor"=tree) is a joint initiative of the Lehrstuhl
fuer Mikrobiologie http://www.mikro.biologie.tu-muenchen.de/ and the
Lehrstuhl fuer Rechnertechnik und Rechnerorganisation
http://wwwbode.informatik.tu-muenchen.de/ of the Technical University
of Munich.
Package: libarb
Architecture: amd64 i386 kfreebsd-i386 kfreebsd-amd64
Depends: ${misc:Depends},
${shlibs:Depends}
Recommends: arb
Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - libraries
The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
user-defined criteria.
.
The ARB project (latin, "arbor"=tree) is a joint initiative of the Lehrstuhl
fuer Mikrobiologie http://www.mikro.biologie.tu-muenchen.de/ and the
Lehrstuhl fuer Rechnertechnik und Rechnerorganisation
http://wwwbode.informatik.tu-muenchen.de/ of the Technical University
of Munich.
.
This package provides the dynamic libraries which are used by Arb.
Package: libarb-dev
Architecture: amd64 i386 kfreebsd-i386 kfreebsd-amd64
Section: non-free/libdevel
Depends: libarb (= ${binary:Version}),
${misc:Depends}
Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - development files
The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
user-defined criteria.
.
The ARB project (latin, "arbor"=tree) is a joint initiative of the Lehrstuhl
fuer Mikrobiologie http://www.mikro.biologie.tu-muenchen.de/ and the
Lehrstuhl fuer Rechnertechnik und Rechnerorganisation
http://wwwbode.informatik.tu-muenchen.de/ of the Technical University
of Munich.
.
This package provides headers and static libs needed to link against libARBDB.
Package: arb-common
Architecture: all
Depends: adduser,
arb-doc (= ${source:Version}),
ghostscript | postscript-preview,
gv | postscript-viewer,
perl-modules,
${misc:Depends},
${perl:Depends}
Recommends: arb
Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - common files
The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
user-defined criteria.
.
This package provides the architecture independent scripts of Arb.
Package: arb-doc
Architecture: all
Section: non-free/doc
Depends: ghostscript | postscript-preview,
gv | postscript-viewer,
${misc:Depends}
Suggests: arb
Description: phylogenetic sequence analysis software - documentation
The ARB software is a graphically-oriented package comprising various tools
for sequence database handling and data analysis. A central database of
processed (aligned) sequences and any type of additional data linked to the
respective sequence entries is structured according to phylogeny or other
user-defined criteria.
.
This package provides the documentation for Arb.
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