Re: [RFR] templates://mopidy/{mopidy.templates}
Christian PERRIER wrote:
> --- mopidy.old/debian/mopidy.templates 2014-07-12 07:22:16.176133080 +0200
> +++ mopidy/debian/mopidy.templates 2014-07-17 07:52:14.518298353 +0200
> @@ -3,11 +3,11 @@
> Default: false
> _Description: Should the Mopidy server be started at boot?
Don't we normally recommend trimming this down to:
_Description: Start the Mopidy server at boot?
Otherwise, agreed...
[...]
Meanwhile in the control file:
> Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients
> Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
> - your local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
Both from what and what? "Both from multiple sources and from... some
other sources"? And presumably it doesn't mean that it can play music
from several sources at once; just that it can play music from all the
following sources, which it's helpfully pointing out in advance are a
list containing more than one item.
Or is it trying to emphasise the non-exhaustiveness of the list? If
so, what are the alternatives it's leaving out?
Presumably "local hard drive" also covers thumbdrives, CDs and so on -
and given that Mopidy is often installed on devices that don't have a
"hard drive" as such, perhaps it should say "local files".
The upstream website says "and from cloud services like Spotify,
SoundCloud, and Google Play Music", but maybe that last isn't
supported in this version? Actually, upstream also says that out of
the box it can't do Spotify or SoundCloud either until you've
installed some extensions, but maybe the Debian version includes them
as standard?
Upstream also seem keen on the word "extensible" (their main tagline
is now "Mopidy is an extensible music server written in Python."), so
maybe that should go in here too.
So that's basically
Mopidy is an extensible music server which can play music from from local
files, radio streams, and cloud services such as Spotify and SoundCloud.
> - Searches combines results from all music sources, and you can mix tracks from
> - all sources in your play queue. Your playlists from Spotify or SoundCloud are
> + the local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
> + .
> + Searches combines results from all music sources, and tracks can be mixed from
> + all sources in the play queue. Spotify or SoundCloud playlists are
> also available for use.
>
> Split in two paragraphs for readability.
>
> Unpersonnalize (drop "your")
"Searches combines" is an agreement error (they "combine" things), but
otherwise yes.
WhyTheName footnote: consonants from MPD, vowels from Spotify.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Template: mopidy/daemon
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Start the Mopidy server at boot?
The Mopidy server can be run as a system service, automatically starting
at boot. It will be listening to MPD connections on port 6600 and HTTP
connections on port 6680. By default, it will only accept connections from
the local machine.
.
You have the option of starting the Mopidy server automatically on system
boot. If in doubt, it is suggested to not start it automatically on boot.
.
This setting can be modified later by running "dpkg-reconfigure mopidy".
Source: mopidy
Section: sound
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Stein Magnus Jodal <stein.magnus@jodal.no>
Build-Depends:
debhelper (>= 8.0.0),
python (>= 2.7),
python-setuptools,
python-sphinx (>= 1.0),
python-pygraphviz
Standards-Version: 3.9.5
Homepage: http://www.mopidy.com/
Vcs-Git: git://github.com/mopidy/mopidy.git
Vcs-Browser: https://github.com/mopidy/mopidy
X-Python-Version: >= 2.7
Package: mopidy
Architecture: all
Depends:
${misc:Depends},
${python:Depends},
adduser,
debconf,
lsb-base,
gstreamer0.10-plugins-good,
python-gst0.10
Recommends:
gstreamer0.10-alsa,
gstreamer0.10-plugins-ugly,
gstreamer0.10-tools,
python-cherrypy3,
python-ws4py
Suggests:
mopidy-doc
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients
Mopidy is an extensible music server which can play music from local
files, radio streams, and cloud services such as Spotify and SoundCloud.
.
Searches combine results from all music sources, and tracks can be mixed from
all sources in the play queue. Spotify or SoundCloud playlists are
also available for use.
Package: mopidy-doc
Section: doc
Architecture: all
Depends:
${misc:Depends},
${sphinxdoc:Depends}
Recommends: mopidy
Replaces: mopidy (<< 0.7.3-2)
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients - documentation
Mopidy is an extensible music server which can play music from local
files, radio streams, and cloud services such as Spotify and SoundCloud.
.
This package provides the documentation for Mopidy.
diff -ru mopidy-0.18.3.pristine/debian/control mopidy-0.18.3/debian/control
--- mopidy-0.18.3.pristine/debian/control 2014-05-26 09:22:32.000000000 +0100
+++ mopidy-0.18.3/debian/control 2014-07-21 09:16:38.220562609 +0100
@@ -33,10 +33,11 @@
Suggests:
mopidy-doc
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients
- Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
- your local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
- Searches combines results from all music sources, and you can mix tracks from
- all sources in your play queue. Your playlists from Spotify or SoundCloud are
+ Mopidy is an extensible music server which can play music from local
+ files, radio streams, and cloud services such as Spotify and SoundCloud.
+ .
+ Searches combine results from all music sources, and tracks can be mixed from
+ all sources in the play queue. Spotify or SoundCloud playlists are
also available for use.
Package: mopidy-doc
@@ -48,7 +49,7 @@
Recommends: mopidy
Replaces: mopidy (<< 0.7.3-2)
Description: music server with support for MPD/HTTP clients - documentation
- Mopidy is a music server which can play music both from multiple sources, like
- your local hard drive, radio streams, and from Spotify and SoundCloud.
+ Mopidy is an extensible music server which can play music from local
+ files, radio streams, and cloud services such as Spotify and SoundCloud.
.
- The packages includes documentation for Mopidy.
+ This package provides the documentation for Mopidy.
diff -ru mopidy-0.18.3.pristine/debian/mopidy.templates mopidy-0.18.3/debian/mopidy.templates
--- mopidy-0.18.3.pristine/debian/mopidy.templates 2014-05-26 09:22:28.000000000 +0100
+++ mopidy-0.18.3/debian/mopidy.templates 2014-07-21 09:17:00.683946821 +0100
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
Template: mopidy/daemon
Type: boolean
Default: false
-_Description: Should the Mopidy server be started at boot?
+_Description: Start the Mopidy server at boot?
The Mopidy server can be run as a system service, automatically starting
- at boot. It will be listening to MPD connections at port 6600 and HTTP
- connections at port 6680. By default, it will only accept connections from
- localhost.
+ at boot. It will be listening to MPD connections on port 6600 and HTTP
+ connections on port 6680. By default, it will only accept connections from
+ the local machine.
.
You have the option of starting the Mopidy server automatically on system
boot. If in doubt, it is suggested to not start it automatically on boot.
.
- This setting can be modified later by running 'dpkg-reconfigure mopidy'.
+ This setting can be modified later by running "dpkg-reconfigure mopidy".
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