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Re: [LCFC] templates://pluxml/{templates}



Christian PERRIER wrote:
> This is the last call for comments for the review of debconf
> templates for pluxml.

Sorry, I've just spotted a mis-edit in my changes to the package
description:

> Package: pluxml
[...]
> Description: light blog/CMS engine powered by XML
>  PluXml is a lightweight blogging and Content Management System that uses
>  simple XML files to store its data and requires no database. It has all the
>  usual features (static pages, comments, categories, tags, media managements,
                                                                             ^
That "s" didn't belong on the end of "media", and it doesn't belong on
the end of "management" either.

Corrected control file and overall patch attached.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Source: pluxml
Section: web
Priority: extra
Maintainer: Tanguy Ortolo <tanguy+debian@ortolo.eu>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 8.0.0), po-debconf (>= 0.8.0), slimit
Standards-Version: 3.9.4
Homepage: http://www.pluxml.org/
Vcs-Git: git://git.ortolo.org/pkg-pluxml.git
Vcs-Browser: http://git.ortolo.org/pkg-pluxml.git

Package: pluxml
Architecture: all
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, ucf, php5
Recommends: php5-gd
Suggests: mail-transport-agent
Description: light blog/CMS engine powered by XML
 PluXml is a lightweight blogging and Content Management System that uses
 simple XML files to store its data and requires no database. It has all the
 usual features (static pages, comments, categories, tags, media management,
 RSS feed, etc.) and supports multiple users, customizable themes, and
 plugins.
diff -ru pluxml-5.2.pristine/debian/control pluxml-5.2/debian/control
--- pluxml-5.2.pristine/debian/control	2013-08-18 21:01:40.000000000 +0100
+++ pluxml-5.2/debian/control	2013-09-26 09:45:04.035407049 +0100
@@ -13,8 +13,9 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, ucf, php5
 Recommends: php5-gd
 Suggests: mail-transport-agent
-Description: Light blog engine using XML files
- PluXml is a light and simple blog and CMS engine that uses simple XML files
- to store its data and requires no database. It has all the usual features
- (static pages, comments, categories, tags, medias, RSS feed...) and supports
- multiple users, customizable themes and plugins.
+Description: light blog/CMS engine powered by XML
+ PluXml is a lightweight blogging and Content Management System that uses
+ simple XML files to store its data and requires no database. It has all the
+ usual features (static pages, comments, categories, tags, media management,
+ RSS feed, etc.) and supports multiple users, customizable themes, and
+ plugins.
diff -ru pluxml-5.2.pristine/debian/templates pluxml-5.2/debian/templates
--- pluxml-5.2.pristine/debian/templates	2013-08-17 22:25:01.000000000 +0100
+++ pluxml-5.2/debian/templates	2013-09-26 09:44:43.332036094 +0100
@@ -6,10 +6,10 @@
  PluXml can run on any web server supporting PHP, but only listed web servers
  can be configured automatically by this package.
  .
- Please note that you will have to make sure a PHP interpreter is enabled for
- your webserver.
- .
  Please select the web servers that should be configured for PluXml.
+ .
+ Note that you will have to make sure a PHP interpreter is enabled for the
+ web server.
 
 Template: pluxml/system/reload-webserver
 Type: boolean
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 _Description: Purge blog data on package removal?
- PluXml will store all your blog data in /var/lib/pluxml.
+ PluXml will store all blog data in /var/lib/pluxml.
  .
- Accepting this option will remove all the blog data when this package is
+ Accepting this option will remove all blog data when this package is
  purged, which will leave you with a tidy system but may cause data loss if you
  purge an operational blog.
 
@@ -45,16 +45,14 @@
 
 Template: pluxml/blog/lang
 Type: select
-__Choices: German (de), English (en), Spanish (es), French (fr), Italian (it), Dutch (nl), Polish (pl), Portuguese (pt), Romanian (ro), Russian (ru)
+__Choices: German, English, Spanish, French, Italian, Dutch, Polish, Portuguese, Romanian, Russian
 Choices-C: de, en, es, fr, it, nl, pl, pt, ro, ru
-# You must NOT translate this string, but you can change its value. The comment
-# between brackets is used to distinguish this msgid from the one in the
-# Choices list; you do not have to worry about them, but you simply have to
-# choose a msgstr among the language codes listed in the parentheses of the
-# English Choices above, e.g. msgstr "nl" (NOT msgstr "Dutch (nl)").
-_Default: en[ default language]
+# You must NOT translate this string, but you can change its value.
+# You should put your language (if it is among the possible choices)
+# so that it becomes the default for users of that language
+_Default: English
 _Description: Blog default language:
- Please choose the default language of your blog, which will be used for the
+ Please choose the default language of this blog, which will be used for the
  public pages.
  .
  Registered blog contributors will be able to choose their language for the
@@ -64,7 +62,7 @@
 Type: string
 Default: PluXml
 _Description: Blog title:
- Please choose a title for your blog, which will be displayed in the top of each
+ Please choose a title for this blog. It will be displayed at the top of each
  page and in the browser window title.
 
 Template: pluxml/blog/description
@@ -75,8 +73,8 @@
 # (replace $LANG by your language code), under the name "L_SITE_DESCRIPTION".
 _Default: Blog or CMS, XML powered!
 _Description: Blog description or subtitle:
- Please choose a short description for your blog, which will be displayed as a
- subtitle in the top of each page and in the browser window title.
+ Please choose a short description for this blog. It will be displayed as a
+ subtitle at the top of each page and in the browser window title.
 
 Template: pluxml/blog/name
 Type: string
@@ -90,10 +88,10 @@
 Template: pluxml/blog/login
 Type: string
 Default: admin
-_Description: Administrator user name:
+_Description: Administrator username:
  Please enter a name for the administrator account, which will be used to manage
- PluXml's configuration, users and content. The username should be composed of
- lowercase ASCII letters only.
+ PluXml's configuration, users, and content. The username should only
+ contain lowercase ASCII letters.
 
 Template: pluxml/blog/password
 Type: password
@@ -103,10 +101,10 @@
 Template: pluxml/blog/confirm
 Type: password
 _Description: Confirm password:
- Please enter the same administrator password again to verify you have typed it
- correctly.
+ Please enter the same password again to verify that you have
+ typed it correctly.
 
 Template: pluxml/blog/failpass
 Type: error
-_Description: Password mismatch
- The two passwords you entered are not identical. Please try again.
+_Description: Password input error
+ The two passwords you entered were not the same. Please try again.

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