Re: Things to check in release notes
Justin B Rye wrote:
> As it happens I was just about to post the about.dbk file as a test
> case - its contents seem stable and I only see one missing comma in
> the whole file. See attachment.
Here's a second simple one: installing.dbk
As well as a slightly stale section on software speech (which is
presumably still true, so I've just taken out the word that implies
it's news), this chapter has a large stale section on supported
languages, which needs to be updated at some point.
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Index: installing.dbk
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--- installing.dbk (revision 9817)
+++ installing.dbk (working copy)
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
<title>What's new in the installation system?</title>
<para>
There has been a lot of development on the Debian Installer since its first
-official release with &debian; 3.1 (sarge)
+official release with &debian; 3.1 (sarge),
resulting in both improved hardware support and
some exciting new features.
</para>
@@ -112,8 +112,8 @@
<term>Software speech support</term>
<listitem>
<para>
-&debian; can now be installed using software speech, for instance by
-visually impaired people who do not use a braille device. This is
+&debian; can be installed using software speech, for instance by
+visually impaired people who do not use a Braille device. This is
triggered simply by typing <literal>s</literal> and
<literal>Enter</literal> at the installer boot beep. More than a dozen
languages are supported.
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