Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the squid-deb-proxy source package.
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--- squid-deb-proxy.old/debian/squid-deb-proxy.templates 2013-04-20 08:32:42.653002140 +0200
+++ squid-deb-proxy/debian/squid-deb-proxy.templates 2013-04-24 07:30:14.255455324 +0200
@@ -1,16 +1,17 @@
Template: squid-deb-proxy/ppa-enable
Type: boolean
Default: false
-_Description: Allow PPA (Personal Package Archive) access?
- Squid-deb-proxy by default will not allow PPA repositories from launchpad.
- Selecting Y in this option will activate PPA repo access.
+_Description: Allow PPA access?
+ By default, squid-deb-proxy does not allow to access Personal Packages
+ Archive (PPA) repositories from Launchpad.
+ .
+ Choosing this option will allow this.
As PPA is explained in the long description, it's maybe not needed to
explain it again in the short one.
Avoid "Selecting Y" as the "true" choice in a boolean template is not
always translated as a Yes/No choice. Hence using our standard wording.
Template: squid-deb-proxy/acl-disable
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Allow unrestricted network access?
- Squid-deb-proxy restricts access to the cache to private networks
- only by default.
- Selecting Y in this option will allow unrestricted access of all IPs
- to access the cache. Selecting N will only allow private networks
- (10.0.0.0/8, 172.16.0.0/12, 192.168.0.0/16) to access the cache.
+ By default, squid-deb-proxy restricts access to the cache to private
+ networks (10.0.0.0/8, 172.16.0.0/12, 192.168.0.0/16).
+ .
+ Choosing this option will allow other IP addresses to access the cache.
Reformulation to make things clearer (?).
--- squid-deb-proxy.old/debian/control 2013-04-20 08:32:42.653002140 +0200
+++ squid-deb-proxy/debian/control 2013-04-28 14:37:16.233346451 +0200
@@ -18,18 +18,15 @@
squid3
Recommends: avahi-utils
Description: Squid proxy configuration optimized for deb packages
- This package contains a squid proxy configuration that is optimized
+ This package contains a Squid proxy configuration that is optimized
for downloading deb packages. It defaults to a different cache
- directory and port than the regular squid cache.
- .
- The config default to allowing cached access from a local network
- to *.archive.ubuntu.com.
+ directory and port than the regular Squid cache.
Capitalize "Squid".
Package: squid-deb-proxy-client
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, avahi-utils, apt (>= 0.7.25.3ubuntu1), python
-Description: Automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi
- This package contains a helper for the apt http method to discover
+Description: automatic proxy discovery for APT based on avahi
+ This package contains a helper for the APT HTTP method to discover
proxies that publish their service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
It was written to be installed on clients that should use
uncapitalize the short description...and capitalize "http" as this is
an acronym.
@@ -41,12 +38,12 @@
Section: debian-installer
Architecture: all
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, configured-network,
-Description: Automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi (udeb)
- This package contains a helper for the apt http method to discover
+Description: automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi (udeb)
+ This package contains a helper for the apt HTTP method to discover
proxies that publish their service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
It was written to be installed on clients that should use
squid-deb-proxy automatically, but it will work with any proxy
that publishes the service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
- This package contains the udeb only
+ This package contains the udeb for use with the Debian Installer.
Standard "udeb" paragraph.
--
Template: squid-deb-proxy/ppa-enable Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Allow PPA access? By default, squid-deb-proxy does not allow to access Personal Packages Archive (PPA) repositories from Launchpad. . Choosing this option will allow this. Template: squid-deb-proxy/acl-disable Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Allow unrestricted network access? By default, squid-deb-proxy restricts access to the cache to private networks (10.0.0.0/8, 172.16.0.0/12, 192.168.0.0/16). . Choosing this option will allow other IP addresses to access the cache.
--- squid-deb-proxy.old/debian/squid-deb-proxy.templates 2013-04-20 08:32:42.653002140 +0200
+++ squid-deb-proxy/debian/squid-deb-proxy.templates 2013-04-24 07:30:14.255455324 +0200
@@ -1,16 +1,17 @@
Template: squid-deb-proxy/ppa-enable
Type: boolean
Default: false
-_Description: Allow PPA (Personal Package Archive) access?
- Squid-deb-proxy by default will not allow PPA repositories from launchpad.
- Selecting Y in this option will activate PPA repo access.
+_Description: Allow PPA access?
+ By default, squid-deb-proxy does not allow to access Personal Packages
+ Archive (PPA) repositories from Launchpad.
+ .
+ Choosing this option will allow this.
Template: squid-deb-proxy/acl-disable
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Allow unrestricted network access?
- Squid-deb-proxy restricts access to the cache to private networks
- only by default.
- Selecting Y in this option will allow unrestricted access of all IPs
- to access the cache. Selecting N will only allow private networks
- (10.0.0.0/8, 172.16.0.0/12, 192.168.0.0/16) to access the cache.
+ By default, squid-deb-proxy restricts access to the cache to private
+ networks (10.0.0.0/8, 172.16.0.0/12, 192.168.0.0/16).
+ .
+ Choosing this option will allow other IP addresses to access the cache.
--- squid-deb-proxy.old/debian/control 2013-04-20 08:32:42.653002140 +0200
+++ squid-deb-proxy/debian/control 2013-04-28 14:37:16.233346451 +0200
@@ -18,18 +18,15 @@
squid3
Recommends: avahi-utils
Description: Squid proxy configuration optimized for deb packages
- This package contains a squid proxy configuration that is optimized
+ This package contains a Squid proxy configuration that is optimized
for downloading deb packages. It defaults to a different cache
- directory and port than the regular squid cache.
- .
- The config default to allowing cached access from a local network
- to *.archive.ubuntu.com.
+ directory and port than the regular Squid cache.
Package: squid-deb-proxy-client
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, avahi-utils, apt (>= 0.7.25.3ubuntu1), python
-Description: Automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi
- This package contains a helper for the apt http method to discover
+Description: automatic proxy discovery for APT based on avahi
+ This package contains a helper for the APT HTTP method to discover
proxies that publish their service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
It was written to be installed on clients that should use
@@ -41,12 +38,12 @@
Section: debian-installer
Architecture: all
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, configured-network,
-Description: Automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi (udeb)
- This package contains a helper for the apt http method to discover
+Description: automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi (udeb)
+ This package contains a helper for the apt HTTP method to discover
proxies that publish their service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
It was written to be installed on clients that should use
squid-deb-proxy automatically, but it will work with any proxy
that publishes the service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
- This package contains the udeb only
+ This package contains the udeb for use with the Debian Installer.
Source: squid-deb-proxy
Section: net
Priority: extra
Maintainer: Michael Vogt <mvo@debian.org>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 7.0.50),
gettext,
intltool,
pkg-config,
po-debconf
Standards-Version: 3.9.4
Vcs-Bzr: https://code.launchpad.net/~squid-deb-proxy-developers/squid-deb-proxy/trunk
Homepage: https://launchpad.net/squid-deb-proxy
Package: squid-deb-proxy
Architecture: all
Depends: ${python:Depends},
${misc:Depends},
squid3
Recommends: avahi-utils
Description: Squid proxy configuration optimized for deb packages
This package contains a Squid proxy configuration that is optimized
for downloading deb packages. It defaults to a different cache
directory and port than the regular Squid cache.
Package: squid-deb-proxy-client
Architecture: all
Depends: ${misc:Depends}, avahi-utils, apt (>= 0.7.25.3ubuntu1), python
Description: automatic proxy discovery for APT based on avahi
This package contains a helper for the APT HTTP method to discover
proxies that publish their service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
It was written to be installed on clients that should use
squid-deb-proxy automatically, but it will work with any proxy
that publishes the service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
Package: squid-deb-proxy-client-udeb
XC-Package-Type: udeb
Section: debian-installer
Architecture: all
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, configured-network,
Description: automatic proxy discovery for apt based on avahi (udeb)
This package contains a helper for the apt HTTP method to discover
proxies that publish their service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
It was written to be installed on clients that should use
squid-deb-proxy automatically, but it will work with any proxy
that publishes the service as _apt_proxy._tcp.
.
This package contains the udeb for use with the Debian Installer.
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