webwml://debian-installer/errata

[victory <victory.deb@gmail.com>]

about this sentense (webwml://debian-installer/errata):
 the grub bootloader was installed onto the USB stick instead of the hard disc,
 where the rest of the system was installed.
and without ",":
 the grub bootloader was installed onto the USB stick instead of the hard disc
 where the rest of the system was installed.

as I said on the IRC below,
 without ",", it is completely clear that hard disc = the rest,
 and with "," it become unclear as it separates sentenses at that place purposely:
  then, the context seems saying hard disc = the rest, so
  hard disc probably = the rest,
  but USB stick may be = the rest.

I needed to think twice or more.


00:40 victory > that the grub bootloader was installed onto the USB stick instead
                of the hard disc, where the rest of the system was installed.
00:40 victory > is the last "," needed?
00:41 KiBi > given how long the sentence is, I think so
00:42 victory > rest of ... is installed on the hard disc
00:43 victory > is expected, that should be removed I think 
00:45 victory > that can lead to rest of ... is installed on the USB stick
                as it separates sentenses at that place
00:54 victory > without ",", this is completely clear that
                hard disc = the rest...:
                the grub bootloader was installed onto the USB stick instead
                of the hard disc where the rest of the system was installed.
00:56 KiBi > since neither of us is a native speaker, ask on -english

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