Review (Re: DPN 2013/16 frozen. Please review and translate.)

[Filipus Klutiero <chealer@gmail.com>]

On 2013-09-13 19:20, Cédric Boutillier wrote:
> [ Please reply on -publicity list ]
>
> Hi all,
>
> We have just finished the last bits of the new issue of DPN
> to be released Monday. We would appreciate reviews and translations.
>
> Instructions are available on the wiki:
> http://wiki.debian.org/ProjectNews
>
> As usual, the last updated version is available on the publicity
> Subversion repository, even via HTTP:
> http://anonscm.debian.org/viewvc/publicity/dpn/en/current/index.wml?view=co
>
> If you're willing to contribute to the redaction of the next issue,
> don't hesitate, and join #debian-publicity IRC channel or send a message
> to debian-publicity@lists.debian.org.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Cédric

Thank you very much Cédric and everyone. Just one remark:

>     <p>
> 8 applicants have been
> <a href="https://nm.debian.org/public/nmlist#done";>accepted</a>
>     as Debian Developers,
> 12 applicants have
> <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2013/07/msg00024.html";>been</a>
> <a href="http://lists.debian.org/debian-project/2013/09/msg00038.html";>accepted</a>
>     as Debian Maintainer, and
> 33 people have <a href="http://udd.debian.org/cgi-bin/new-maintainers.cgi";>started
>         to maintain packages</a> since the previous issue of the Debian
>     Project News. Please welcome
> #DDs
> Hannes von Haugwitz,
> Nicolas Dandrimont,
> Brian Gupta,
> Richard Michael Hartmann,
> Agustin Henze,
> Alberto Garcia,
> James Downing Page,
> Michael Beattie,
> #DMs
> Apollon Oikonomopoulos,
> Joao Eriberto Mota Filho,
> Maarten Lankhorst,
> Martijn van Brummelen,
> Salvo 'LtWorf' Tomaselli,
> Uwe Kleine-König,
> Colin King,
> Joe Healy,
> Adrien Grellier,
> Phillip Susi,
> Sergey Suslov,
> Tom Jampen,
> #DCs
> Adam Stokes,
> Oliver Sander,
> Daniel Mizyrycki,
> Petr Salinger,
> David Suárez,
> Stephen Nelson,
> Pablo Oliveira,
> Maarten Lankhorst,
> Laurent Destailleur,
> Bas Couwenberg,
> Emanuele Aina,
> Daniel Pfeiffer,
> Jack Bates,
> Dirk Huenniger,
> Andrea Rota,
> Guillaume Bouteille,
> Jose M Calhariz,
> Olof Johansson,
> Jackson Doak,
> Simon Kainz,
> Micah Gersten,
> Miles Lubin,
> Axel Wagner,
> Anton Balashov,
> Benjamin Barenblat,
> Tonnerre Lombard,
> Federico Brega,
> David Parsons,
> Axel Wagner,
> Léo Cavaillé,
> Stewart Smith,
> Maarten L. Hekkelman, and
> Thomas Bechtold
>     into our project!</p>

The pluralization is inconsistent in the first sentence.
As previously discussed, the list is also unclear and often misleading. Its "Debian Developer" terminology should now also be updated.

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Filipus Klutiero
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