Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the italc source package.
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--- italc.old/debian/italc-client.templates 2013-08-15 10:48:49.746321613 +0200
+++ italc/debian/italc-client.templates 2013-08-19 14:23:00.877825759 +0200
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
iTALC knows four different access roles for iTALC clients (teacher, student,
supporter, and administrator).
.
- iTALC manages this role based client access via SSL keys.
+ iTALC manages this role-based client access via SSL keys.
.
After installation of this package you may want those SSL keys to be
created automatically. If so, you will find the freshly created keys in
"role based" --> "role-based"
@@ -35,30 +35,30 @@
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Create Posix groups for iTALC roles now?
- iTALC's role model requires configuration of four Posix groups on your
+ iTALC's role model requires configuration of four Posix groups on the
system. The available roles are teacher, student, supporter, and admin.
.
You can either create those four Posix groups now or (re-)use Posix groups
- that already exist on your system.
+ that already exist on the system.
Impersonate the system. This is not necessarily "my" system.
Template: italc-client/use-existing-groups-for-roles
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Use already existing groups for iTALC roles?
If you already have set up groups for reflecting the iTALC role model
- (e.g. in your LDAP user/group database) then you can specify those group
+ (e.g. in the LDAP user/group database) then you can specify those group
names on the next screens.
Ditto
Template: italc-client/group-italc-teacher
Type: string
Default: italc-teacher
-_Description: Group for people in the role of iTALC teachers:
- Specify the Posix group name for people in the role of an iTALC teacher.
- The teacher role gives you basic control over iTALC clients in class
+_Description: iTALC teachers role group:
+ Please specify the Posix group name for iTALC teachers.
+ .
+ The teacher role gives basic control over iTALC clients in class
rooms.
.
- If the below field stays empty, then the Posix group root will be used
- instead.
+ If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used.
Template: italc-client/del-last-group-teacher
Type: boolean
Synopsis: more compact formulation
Split the first paragraph in two for better factorization, for translators
The field is not necessarily "below". It can be "above" or "aside",
depending on the debconf interface that's used. So switch to a more
standard formulation.
Quote "root" so that it is clearer what we're talking about.
These changes are repeated over for the other similar templates.
@@ -66,18 +66,18 @@
_Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role?
The Posix group for the iTALC teacher role has been modified.
.
- If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate your
+ If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the
system later.
Template: italc-client/key-access-for-groups
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Make iTALC's SSL keys accessible to the role model groups?
- To make the iTALC role model fully functional now, specific group access
+ To make the iTALC role model fully functional now, specific group access
to the created SSL keys has to be granted.
.
If you skip this step, iTALC SSL keys are only accessible by the
- super-user `root' and you have to manually setup file permissions on the
+ super-user "root" and you have to manually setup file permissions on the
keys later.
1st para: no change...:-)
quote "root" with the standard double quotes we're using all over
debconf templates.
--- italc.old/debian/control 2013-08-15 10:48:49.746321613 +0200
+++ italc/debian/control 2013-08-19 14:31:38.957576368 +0200
@@ -44,11 +44,11 @@
libitalccore (=${binary:Version}),
Description: Intelligent Teaching and Learning with Computers - Master
iTALC makes it possible, to access and influence the students
- activities just from the computer of the teacher. With the
- help of iTALC, for example the teacher is able to see the
+ activities just from the computer of the teacher. For example, with the
+ help of iTALC, the teacher is able to see the
content of the students screens on his screen. If a student needs
help, the teacher can access the students desktop and give support
- from his computer. The student can watch all activities, the
+ from his computer. The student can watch all activities the
teacher is doing on his desktop. So the student can learn new processes.
For teaching something to all students, you can switch into demo-mode
where all screens of the students show the teacher-screen.
Move "for example" for (I guess) better English
Drop the comma: I don't think it's needed here
These changes are of course repeated in all other boilerplates
@@ -134,4 +134,4 @@
Furthermore things like locking student's screens, killing games,
power on/off clients and much more can be done with iTALC.
.
- This package provides the necessary library for italc
+ This package provides the needed libraries for iTALC.
Properly capitalize iTALC. Add a sentence dot. s/necessary/needed (?)
--
Template: italc-client/last-group-teacher Type: string Default: Description: for internal use Template: italc-client/last-group-student Type: string Default: Description: for internal use Template: italc-client/last-group-supporter Type: string Default: Description: for internal use Template: italc-client/last-group-admin Type: string Default: Description: for internal use Template: italc-client/create-keypairs Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Automatically set up iTALC's role model and create iTALC SSL key pairs? iTALC knows four different access roles for iTALC clients (teacher, student, supporter, and administrator). . iTALC manages this role-based client access via SSL keys. . After installation of this package you may want those SSL keys to be created automatically. If so, you will find the freshly created keys in subfolders of /etc/italc/keys. Template: italc-client/create-groups-for-roles Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Create Posix groups for iTALC roles now? iTALC's role model requires configuration of four Posix groups on the system. The available roles are teacher, student, supporter, and admin. . You can either create those four Posix groups now or (re-)use Posix groups that already exist on the system. Template: italc-client/use-existing-groups-for-roles Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Use already existing groups for iTALC roles? If you already have set up groups for reflecting the iTALC role model (e.g. in the LDAP user/group database) then you can specify those group names on the next screens. Template: italc-client/group-italc-teacher Type: string Default: italc-teacher _Description: iTALC teachers role group: Please specify the Posix group name for iTALC teachers. . The teacher role gives basic control over iTALC clients in class rooms. . If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used. Template: italc-client/del-last-group-teacher Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role? The Posix group for the iTALC teacher role has been modified. . If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the system later. Template: italc-client/group-italc-student Type: string Default: italc-student _Description: iTALC students role group: Please specify the Posix group name for iTALC students. . The iTALC client only starts for users being a member in this group. . If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used. Template: italc-client/del-last-group-student Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role? The Posix group for the iTALC student role has been modified. . If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the system later. Template: italc-client/group-italc-supporter Type: string Default: italc-supporter _Description: iTALC supporters role group: Please specify the Posix group name for iTALC supporters. . The supporter role gives extended control over the iTALC setup on this site and facilitates giving support to iTALC users. . If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used. Template: italc-client/del-last-group-supporter Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role? The Posix group for the iTALC supporter role has been modified. . If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the system later. Template: italc-client/group-italc-admin Type: string Default: italc-admin _Description: iTALC administrators role group: Please Specify the Posix group name for iTALC administrators. . The administrator role grants full access to the iTALC instance on this site. . If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used. Template: italc-client/del-last-group-admin Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role? The Posix group for the iTALC administrator role has been modified. . If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the system later. Template: italc-client/key-access-for-groups Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Make iTALC's SSL keys accessible to the role model groups? To make the iTALC role model fully functional now, specific group access to the created SSL keys has to be granted. . If you skip this step, iTALC SSL keys are only accessible by the super-user "root" and you have to manually setup file permissions on the keys later.
--- italc.old/debian/italc-client.templates 2013-08-15 10:48:49.746321613 +0200
+++ italc/debian/italc-client.templates 2013-08-19 14:38:42.943306641 +0200
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
iTALC knows four different access roles for iTALC clients (teacher, student,
supporter, and administrator).
.
- iTALC manages this role based client access via SSL keys.
+ iTALC manages this role-based client access via SSL keys.
.
After installation of this package you may want those SSL keys to be
created automatically. If so, you will find the freshly created keys in
@@ -35,30 +35,30 @@
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Create Posix groups for iTALC roles now?
- iTALC's role model requires configuration of four Posix groups on your
+ iTALC's role model requires configuration of four Posix groups on the
system. The available roles are teacher, student, supporter, and admin.
.
You can either create those four Posix groups now or (re-)use Posix groups
- that already exist on your system.
+ that already exist on the system.
Template: italc-client/use-existing-groups-for-roles
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Use already existing groups for iTALC roles?
If you already have set up groups for reflecting the iTALC role model
- (e.g. in your LDAP user/group database) then you can specify those group
+ (e.g. in the LDAP user/group database) then you can specify those group
names on the next screens.
Template: italc-client/group-italc-teacher
Type: string
Default: italc-teacher
-_Description: Group for people in the role of iTALC teachers:
- Specify the Posix group name for people in the role of an iTALC teacher.
- The teacher role gives you basic control over iTALC clients in class
+_Description: iTALC teachers role group:
+ Please specify the Posix group name for iTALC teachers.
+ .
+ The teacher role gives basic control over iTALC clients in class
rooms.
.
- If the below field stays empty, then the Posix group root will be used
- instead.
+ If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used.
Template: italc-client/del-last-group-teacher
Type: boolean
@@ -66,18 +66,18 @@
_Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role?
The Posix group for the iTALC teacher role has been modified.
.
- If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate your
+ If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the
system later.
Template: italc-client/group-italc-student
Type: string
Default: italc-student
-_Description: Group for people in the role of iTALC students:
- Specify the Posix group name for people in the role of an iTALC student.
+_Description: iTALC students role group:
+ Please specify the Posix group name for iTALC students.
+ .
The iTALC client only starts for users being a member in this group.
.
- If the below field stays empty, then the Posix group root will be used
- instead.
+ If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used.
Template: italc-client/del-last-group-student
Type: boolean
@@ -85,19 +85,19 @@
_Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role?
The Posix group for the iTALC student role has been modified.
.
- If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate your
+ If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the
system later.
Template: italc-client/group-italc-supporter
Type: string
Default: italc-supporter
-_Description: Group for people in the role of iTALC supporters:
- Specify the Posix group name for people in the role of an iTALC supporter.
- The supporter role gives extended control over the iTALC setup on your
+_Description: iTALC supporters role group:
+ Please specify the Posix group name for iTALC supporters.
+ .
+ The supporter role gives extended control over the iTALC setup on this
site and facilitates giving support to iTALC users.
.
- If the below field stays empty, then the Posix group root will be used
- instead.
+ If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used.
Template: italc-client/del-last-group-supporter
Type: boolean
@@ -105,27 +105,28 @@
_Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role?
The Posix group for the iTALC supporter role has been modified.
.
- If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate your
+ If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the
system later.
Template: italc-client/group-italc-admin
Type: string
Default: italc-admin
-_Description: Group for people in the role of iTALC administrators:
- Specify the Posix group name for people in the role of an iTALC
- administrator. The admin role grants full access to the iTALC instance on
- your site.
+_Description: iTALC administrators role group:
+ Please Specify the Posix group name for iTALC administrators.
.
- If the below field stays empty, then the Posix group root will be used
- instead.
+ The administrator role grants full access to the iTALC instance on
+ this site.
+ .
+ If you leave this empty, the "root" Posix group will be used.
+
Template: italc-client/del-last-group-admin
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Do you want to delete the group that was formerly used for this role?
- The Posix group for the iTALC admin role has been modified.
+ The Posix group for the iTALC administrator role has been modified.
.
- If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate your
+ If unsure, keep the formerly used group and manually investigate the
system later.
Template: italc-client/key-access-for-groups
@@ -136,5 +137,5 @@
to the created SSL keys has to be granted.
.
If you skip this step, iTALC SSL keys are only accessible by the
- super-user `root' and you have to manually setup file permissions on the
+ super-user "root" and you have to manually setup file permissions on the
keys later.
--- italc.old/debian/control 2013-08-15 10:48:49.746321613 +0200
+++ italc/debian/control 2013-08-19 14:31:38.957576368 +0200
@@ -44,11 +44,11 @@
libitalccore (=${binary:Version}),
Description: Intelligent Teaching and Learning with Computers - Master
iTALC makes it possible, to access and influence the students
- activities just from the computer of the teacher. With the
- help of iTALC, for example the teacher is able to see the
+ activities just from the computer of the teacher. For example, with the
+ help of iTALC, the teacher is able to see the
content of the students screens on his screen. If a student needs
help, the teacher can access the students desktop and give support
- from his computer. The student can watch all activities, the
+ from his computer. The student can watch all activities the
teacher is doing on his desktop. So the student can learn new processes.
For teaching something to all students, you can switch into demo-mode
where all screens of the students show the teacher-screen.
@@ -70,11 +70,11 @@
italc-management-console (=${binary:Version}),
Description: Intelligent Teaching and Learning with Computers - Client
iTALC makes it possible, to access and influence the students
- activities just from the computer of the teacher. With the
- help of iTALC, for example the teacher is able to see the
+ activities just from the computer of the teacher. For example, with the
+ help of iTALC, the teacher is able to see the
content of the students screens on his screen. If a student needs
help, the teacher can access the students desktop and give support
- from his computer. The student can watch all activities, the
+ from his computer. The student can watch all activities the
teacher is doing on his desktop. So the student can learn new processes.
For teaching something to all students, you can switch into demo-mode
where all screens of the students show the teacher-screen.
@@ -134,4 +134,4 @@
Furthermore things like locking student's screens, killing games,
power on/off clients and much more can be done with iTALC.
.
- This package provides the necessary library for italc
+ This package provides the needed libraries for iTALC.
--- italc.old/debian/changelog 2013-08-15 10:48:49.746321613 +0200
+++ italc/debian/changelog 2013-08-15 11:50:11.548741974 +0200
@@ -1,3 +1,11 @@
+italc (1:2.0.1-2) UNRELEASED; urgency=low
+
+ * Debconf templates and debian/control reviewed by the debian-l10n-
+ english team as part of the Smith review project. Closes: #719778
+ * [Debconf translation updates]
+
+ -- Christian Perrier <bubulle@debian.org> Thu, 15 Aug 2013 11:50:11 +0200
+
italc (1:2.0.1-1) unstable; urgency=low
* New upstream version.
Source: italc
Section: x11
Priority: optional
Maintainer: Debian Edu Packaging Team <debian-edu-pkg-team@lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders:
Patrick Winnertz <winnie@debian.org>,
Mike Gabriel <sunweaver@debian.org>,
Build-Depends:
cdbs,
dpkg-dev (>= 1.16.1~),
debhelper (>= 7.0.50~),
cmake,
libqt4-dev,
zlib1g-dev,
libjpeg-dev,
imagemagick,
libpam0g-dev,
libavahi-client-dev,
libssl-dev,
libvncserver-dev (>= 0.9.7),
libxdamage-dev,
libxext-dev,
libxfixes-dev,
libxss-dev,
libxtst-dev,
libxrandr-dev,
libxinerama-dev,
libv4l-dev [linux-any],
gcj-jdk | gcj,
Standards-Version: 3.9.4
Homepage: http://italc.sourceforge.net/home.php
Vcs-Git: git://git.debian.org/debian-edu/italc.git
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=debian-edu/italc.git;a=summary
Package: italc-master
Architecture: any
Pre-Depends:
dpkg (>= 1.15.6~),
Depends:
${shlibs:Depends},
${misc:Depends},
python,
italc-client,
libitalccore (=${binary:Version}),
Description: Intelligent Teaching and Learning with Computers - Master
iTALC makes it possible, to access and influence the students
activities just from the computer of the teacher. For example, with the
help of iTALC, the teacher is able to see the
content of the students screens on his screen. If a student needs
help, the teacher can access the students desktop and give support
from his computer. The student can watch all activities the
teacher is doing on his desktop. So the student can learn new processes.
For teaching something to all students, you can switch into demo-mode
where all screens of the students show the teacher-screen.
Furthermore things like locking student's screens, killing games,
power on/off clients and much more can be done with iTALC.
.
This package contains the software necessary to observe and control iTALC
clients provided by the italc-client package.
Package: italc-client
Architecture: any
Pre-Depends:
dpkg (>= 1.15.6~),
Depends:
${shlibs:Depends},
${misc:Depends},
adduser,
libitalccore (=${binary:Version}),
italc-management-console (=${binary:Version}),
Description: Intelligent Teaching and Learning with Computers - Client
iTALC makes it possible, to access and influence the students
activities just from the computer of the teacher. For example, with the
help of iTALC, the teacher is able to see the
content of the students screens on his screen. If a student needs
help, the teacher can access the students desktop and give support
from his computer. The student can watch all activities the
teacher is doing on his desktop. So the student can learn new processes.
For teaching something to all students, you can switch into demo-mode
where all screens of the students show the teacher-screen.
Furthermore things like locking student's screens, killing games,
power on/off clients and much more can be done with iTALC.
.
This package contains the client software for iTALC that can be controlled
using italc-master.
Package: italc-management-console
Architecture: any
Pre-Depends:
dpkg (>= 1.15.6~),
Depends:
${shlibs:Depends},
${misc:Depends},
libitalccore (=${binary:Version}),
Description: Intelligent Teaching and Learning with Computers - Management Console
iTALC makes it possible, to access and influence the students
activities just from the computer of the teacher. With the
help of iTALC, for example the teacher is able to see the
content of the students screens on his screen. If a student needs
help, the teacher can access the students desktop and give support
from his computer. The student can watch all activities, the
teacher is doing on his desktop. So the student can learn new processes.
For teaching something to all students, you can switch into demo-mode
where all screens of the students show the teacher-screen.
Furthermore things like locking student's screens, killing games,
power on/off clients and much more can be done with iTALC.
.
This package contains the management console for iTALC that helps to configure
and manage iTALC installations.
Package: libitalccore
Architecture: any
Pre-Depends:
dpkg (>= 1.15.6~),
Depends:
${shlibs:Depends},
${misc:Depends},
Provides:
libitalc,
Breaks:
libitalc,
Replaces:
libitalc,
Description: Intelligent Teaching and Learning with Computers - common libraries
iTALC makes it possible, to access and influence the students
activities just from the computer of the teacher. With the
help of iTALC, for example the teacher is able to see the
content of the students screens on his screen. If a student needs
help, the teacher can access the students desktop and give support
from his computer. The student can watch all activities, the
teacher is doing on his desktop. So the student can learn new processes.
For teaching something to all students, you can switch into demo-mode
where all screens of the students show the teacher-screen.
Furthermore things like locking student's screens, killing games,
power on/off clients and much more can be done with iTALC.
.
This package provides the needed libraries for iTALC.
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