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Re: [RFR] templates://glance/{glance-common.templates,glance-api.templates}



Christian PERRIER wrote:
[...]
>  Template: glance/admin-user
>  Type: string
>  Default: admin
> +_Description: Authentication server user name:
> + Please specify the username to use with the authentication server.

Again s/ name/name/

>  Template: glance/admin-password
[...]
>  Template: glance/configure_db
>  Type: boolean
>  Default: true
> +_Description: Set up a database for Glance?
>   No database has been set up for glance-registry or glance-api to use. Before
> + continuing, you should make sure you have the following information:
>   .
> +  * the type of database that you want to use;
> +  * the database server host name (that server must allow TCP connections from this
>      machine);
> +  * a user name and password to access the database.

Ditto

[...]
>  Template: glance/register-endpoint
>  Type: boolean
>  Default: false
> +_Description: Register Glance in the Keystone endpoint catalog?
> + Each Openstack service (each API) should be registered in order to be

s/Openstack/OpenStack/

>   accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone
> + endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now.
>   .
> - Note that you will need to have an up and running keystone server on which to
> - connect using the Keystone auth token.
> + Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to
> + connect using the Keystone authentication token.
> 
> Ditto. Maybe "up-and-running"?

Or maybe even "an operational Keystone server", but never mind.

[...]

>  Template: glance/region-name
>  Type: string
>  Default: regionOne
>  _Description: Name of the region to register:
>   Openstack can be used using availability zones, with each region representing
>   a location. Please enter the zone that you wish to use when registering the
>   endpoint.

s/Openstack/OpenStack/, and "used using" is awkward: say
    OpenStack supports using availability zones, with each region representing

Then in the control file... oh, this one's already been done.
-- 
JBR	with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
	sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Source: glance
Section: net
Priority: extra
Maintainer: PKG OpenStack <openstack-devel@lists.alioth.debian.org>
Uploaders: Julien Danjou <acid@debian.org>,
           Thomas Goirand <zigo@debian.org>,
           Ghe Rivero <ghe.rivero@stackops.com>,
           Mehdi Abaakouk <sileht@sileht.net>
Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 9),
 po-debconf,
 python-all (>= 2.6.6-3~),
 openstack-pkg-tools,
 sqlite3
Build-Depends-Indep:
 curl,
 pep8 (>= 1.3.3),
 python-anyjson,
 python-argparse,
 python-babel,
 python-boto,
 python-coverage,
 python-crypto,
 python-dateutil,
 python-eventlet,
 python-fixtures,
 python-glanceclient,
 python-greenlet,
 python-httplib2 (>= 0.6.0),
 python-iso8601,
 python-jsonschema,
 python-keystoneclient (>= 1:0.2),
 python-kombu,
 python-lxml,
 python-migrate,
 python-mox,
 python-nose,
 python-oslo.config,
 python-passlib,
 python-paste,
 python-pastedeploy,
 python-requests,
 python-routes,
 python-sendfile,
 python-setuptools,
 python-sphinx (>= 1.1.2),
 python-sqlalchemy-ext | python-sqlalchemy (<< 0.6.3-2),
 python-swiftclient (>= 1:1.2),
 python-testtools (>=0.9.22),
 python-tox,
 python-webob,
 python-xattr,
 procps
Standards-Version: 3.9.4
Homepage: http://glance.openstack.org/
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=openstack/glance.git;a=summary
Vcs-Git: git://anonscm.debian.org/openstack/glance.git

Package: python-glance
Architecture: all
Section: python
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends},
 libxml2-dev,
 libxslt-dev,
 python-anyjson,
 python-argparse,
 python-boto,
 python-configobj,
 python-crypto,
 python-dateutil,
 python-eventlet,
 python-greenlet,
 python-httplib2 (>= 0.6.0),
 python-iso8601,
 python-jsonschema,
 python-keystoneclient (>= 1:0.2),
 python-kombu,
 python-lxml,
 python-migrate,
 python-oslo.config,
 python-passlib,
 python-pastedeploy,
 python-requests,
 python-routes,
 python-setuptools,
 python-sqlalchemy-ext | python-sqlalchemy (<< 0.6.3-2),
 python-swiftclient (>= 1:1.2),
 python-webob,
 python-xattr,
 procps
Provides: ${python:Provides}
Description: OpenStack Image Service - Python client library
 The Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and
 retrieving virtual machine images over the cloud. They may be stand-alone
 services, or may be used to deliver images from object stores, such as
 OpenStack's Swift service, to Nova's compute nodes.
 .
 This package contains the Python libraries.

Package: glance
Architecture: all
Section: python
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends:
 glance-api (= ${source:Version}),
 glance-registry (= ${source:Version}),
 ${misc:Depends},
 ${python:Depends}
Suggests: python-ceph
Description: OpenStack Image Service - metapackage
 The Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and
 retrieving virtual machine images over the cloud. They may be stand-alone
 services, or may be used to deliver images from object stores, such as
 OpenStack's Swift service, to Nova's compute nodes.
 .
 This is a dependency package to install all of the Glance suite.

Package: python-glance-doc
Architecture: all
Section: doc
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: libjs-jquery, libjs-underscore, ${misc:Depends}
Description: OpenStack Image Service - Python library documentation
 The Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and
 retrieving virtual machine images over the cloud. They may be stand-alone
 services, or may be used to deliver images from object stores, such as
 OpenStack's Swift service, to Nova's compute nodes.
 .
 This package contains the documentation.

Package: glance-common
Architecture: all
Section: python
Breaks: glance (<< 2012.1~e2-3)
Replaces: glance (<< 2012.1~e2-3)
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends:
 adduser,
 debconf,
 python-glance (= ${source:Version}),
 python-glanceclient,
 ${misc:Depends},
 ${python:Depends},
Description: OpenStack Image Service - common files
 The Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and
 retrieving virtual machine images over the cloud. They may be stand-alone
 services, or may be used to deliver images from object stores, such as
 OpenStack's Swift service, to Nova's compute nodes.
 .
 This package contains common files for Glance.

Package: glance-api
Architecture: all
Section: python
Pre-Depends: adduser, dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, debconf, ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends},
 glance-common (= ${source:Version}),
 python-keystoneclient
Description: OpenStack Image Service - API server
 The Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and
 retrieving virtual machine images over the cloud. They may be stand-alone
 services, or may be used to deliver images from object stores, such as
 OpenStack's Swift service, to Nova's compute nodes.
 .
 This package contains the Glance API server.

Package: glance-registry
Architecture: all
Section: python
Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~)
Depends: adduser, ${ostack-lsb-base}, ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends},
 glance-common (= ${source:Version}),
 dbconfig-common
Description: OpenStack Image Service - registry server
 The Glance project provides services for discovering, registering, and
 retrieving virtual machine images over the cloud. They may be stand-alone
 services, or may be used to deliver images from object stores, such as
 OpenStack's Swift service, to Nova's compute nodes.
 .
 This package contains the Glance registry server.
Template: glance/register-endpoint
Type: boolean
Default: false
_Description: Register Glance in the Keystone endpoint catalog?
 Each OpenStack service (each API) should be registered in order to be
 accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone
 endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now.
 .
 Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to
 connect using the Keystone authentication token.

Template: glance/keystone-ip
Type: string
_Description: Keystone server IP address:
 Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that glance-api can
 contact Keystone to do the Glance service and endpoint creation.

Template: glance/keystone-auth-token
Type: password
_Description: Keystone authentication token:
 To configure its endpoint in Keystone, glance-api needs the Keystone
 authentication token.

Template: glance/endpoint-ip
Type: string
_Description: Glance endpoint IP address:
 Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Glance.
 .
 This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this
 service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public
 IP address.

Template: glance/region-name
Type: string
Default: regionOne
_Description: Name of the region to register:
 OpenStack supports using availability zones, with each region representing
 a location. Please enter the zone that you wish to use when registering the
 endpoint.
# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
# team
#
# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
# debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org for advice.
#
# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.

Template: glance/paste-flavor
Type: select
__Choices: keystone, caching, keystone+caching, cachemanagement, keystone+cachemanagement
Choices-C: keystone, caching, keystone+caching, cachemanagement, keystone+cachemanagement
Default: caching
_Description: Pipeline flavor:
 Please specify the flavor of the pipeline to be used by Glance.
 .
 If you use the OpenStack Identity Service (Keystone), you might want to
 select "keystone". If you don't use this service, you can safely choose
 "caching" only.

Template: glance/auth-host
Type: string
Default: 127.0.0.1
_Description: Authentication server hostname:
 Please specify the hostname of the authentication server for Glance. Typically
 this is also the hostname of the OpenStack Identity Service (Keystone).

Template: glance/admin-tenant-name
Type: string
Default: admin
_Description: Authentication server tenant name:
 Please specify the authentication server tenant name.

Template: glance/admin-user
Type: string
Default: admin
_Description: Authentication server username:
 Please specify the username to use with the authentication server.

Template: glance/admin-password
Type: password
_Description: Authentication server password:
 Please specify the password to use with the authentication server.

Template: glance/configure_db
Type: boolean
Default: true
_Description: Set up a database for Glance?
 No database has been set up for glance-registry or glance-api to use. Before
 continuing, you should make sure you have the following information:
 .
  * the type of database that you want to use;
  * the database server hostname (that server must allow TCP connections from this
    machine);
  * a username and password to access the database.
 .
 If some of these requirements are missing, do not choose this option and run with
 regular SQLite support.
 .
 You can change this setting later on by running "dpkg-reconfigure -plow
 glance-common".
diff -ru glance-2013.1.pristine/debian/glance-api.templates glance-2013.1/debian/glance-api.templates
--- glance-2013.1.pristine/debian/glance-api.templates	2013-05-16 08:11:43.000000000 +0100
+++ glance-2013.1/debian/glance-api.templates	2013-06-02 09:37:26.002257789 +0100
@@ -1,31 +1,30 @@
 Template: glance/register-endpoint
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
-_Description: Register Glance in the keystone endpoint catalog?
- Each Openstack services (each API) should be registered in order to be
+_Description: Register Glance in the Keystone endpoint catalog?
+ Each OpenStack service (each API) should be registered in order to be
  accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone
- endpoint-create". Select if you want to run these commands now.
+ endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now.
  .
- Note that you will need to have an up and running keystone server on which to
- connect using the Keystone auth token.
+ Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to
+ connect using the Keystone authentication token.
 
 Template: glance/keystone-ip
 Type: string
-_Description: Keystone IP address:
- Enter the IP address of your keystone server, so that glance-api can
+_Description: Keystone server IP address:
+ Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that glance-api can
  contact Keystone to do the Glance service and endpoint creation.
 
 Template: glance/keystone-auth-token
 Type: password
-_Description: Keystone Auth Token:
- To configure its endpoint in Keystone, glance-api needs the Keystone auth
- token.
+_Description: Keystone authentication token:
+ To configure its endpoint in Keystone, glance-api needs the Keystone
+ authentication token.
 
 Template: glance/endpoint-ip
 Type: string
 _Description: Glance endpoint IP address:
- Enter the IP address that will be used to contact Glance (eg: the Glance
- endpoint IP address).
+ Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Glance.
  .
  This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this
  service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public
@@ -35,6 +34,6 @@
 Type: string
 Default: regionOne
 _Description: Name of the region to register:
- Openstack can be used using availability zones, with each region representing
+ OpenStack supports using availability zones, with each region representing
  a location. Please enter the zone that you wish to use when registering the
  endpoint.
diff -ru glance-2013.1.pristine/debian/glance-common.templates glance-2013.1/debian/glance-common.templates
--- glance-2013.1.pristine/debian/glance-common.templates	2013-05-16 08:11:43.000000000 +0100
+++ glance-2013.1/debian/glance-common.templates	2013-06-02 09:33:44.420795669 +0100
@@ -9,10 +9,11 @@
 
 Template: glance/paste-flavor
 Type: select
-Choices: keystone, caching, keystone+caching, cachemanagement, keystone+cachemanagement
+__Choices: keystone, caching, keystone+caching, cachemanagement, keystone+cachemanagement
+Choices-C: keystone, caching, keystone+caching, cachemanagement, keystone+cachemanagement
 Default: caching
 _Description: Pipeline flavor:
- Please specify the flavor of pipeline to be used by Glance.
+ Please specify the flavor of the pipeline to be used by Glance.
  .
  If you use the OpenStack Identity Service (Keystone), you might want to
  select "keystone". If you don't use this service, you can safely choose
@@ -21,38 +22,41 @@
 Template: glance/auth-host
 Type: string
 Default: 127.0.0.1
-_Description: Auth server hostname:
- Please specify the URL of your Glance authentication server. Typically
- this is also the URL of your OpenStack Identity Service (Keystone).
+_Description: Authentication server hostname:
+ Please specify the hostname of the authentication server for Glance. Typically
+ this is also the hostname of the OpenStack Identity Service (Keystone).
 
 Template: glance/admin-tenant-name
 Type: string
 Default: admin
-_Description: Auth server tenant name:
+_Description: Authentication server tenant name:
+ Please specify the authentication server tenant name.
 
 Template: glance/admin-user
 Type: string
 Default: admin
-_Description: Auth server username:
+_Description: Authentication server username:
+ Please specify the username to use with the authentication server.
 
 Template: glance/admin-password
 Type: password
-_Description: Auth server password:
+_Description: Authentication server password:
+ Please specify the password to use with the authentication server.
 
 Template: glance/configure_db
 Type: boolean
 Default: true
-_Description: Set up a database for glance?
+_Description: Set up a database for Glance?
  No database has been set up for glance-registry or glance-api to use. Before
- continuing, you should make sure you have:
+ continuing, you should make sure you have the following information:
  .
-  - the server host name (that server must allow TCP connections from this
+  * the type of database that you want to use;
+  * the database server hostname (that server must allow TCP connections from this
     machine);
-  - a username and password to access the database.
-  - A database type that you want to use.
+  * a username and password to access the database.
  .
- If some of these requirements are missing, reject this option and run with
- regular sqlite support.
+ If some of these requirements are missing, do not choose this option and run with
+ regular SQLite support.
  .
- You can change this setting later on by running 'dpkg-reconfigure -plow
- glance-common'.
+ You can change this setting later on by running "dpkg-reconfigure -plow
+ glance-common".

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