Please find, for review, the debconf templates for the ceilometer source package. This review will last from Saturday, June 01, 2013 to Tuesday, June 11, 2013. Please send reviews as unified diffs (diff -u) against the original files. Comments about your proposed changes will be appreciated. Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. When appropriate, I will send intermediate requests for review, with "[RFRn]" (n>=2) as a subject tag. When we will reach a consensus, I send a "Last Chance For Comments" mail with "[LCFC]" as a subject tag. Finally, a summary will be sent to the review bug report, and a mail will be sent to this list with "[BTS]" as a subject tag. Rationale: --- ceilometer.old/debian/ceilometer-api.templates 2013-05-18 13:40:43.837128341 +0300 +++ ceilometer/debian/ceilometer-api.templates 2013-05-24 11:19:12.743085643 +0300 @@ -1,31 +1,31 @@ Template: ceilometer/register-endpoint Type: boolean Default: false -_Description: Register Ceilometer in the keystone endpoint catalog? - Each Openstack services (each API) should be registered in order to be +_Description: Register Ceilometer in the Keystone endpoint catalog? + Each Openstack service (each API) should be registered in order to be accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone - endpoint-create". Select if you want to run these commands now. + endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now. . - Note that you will need to have an up and running keystone server on which to - connect using the Keystone auth token. + Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to + connect using the Keystone authentication token. These proposed changes will be common to several other Openstack-related packages. normalize on "Keystone" with a capital "K" "each" --> singular "Select": select what? The point is indeed that the action will be done if one answers positively to the question. So, just say this. Template: ceilometer/keystone-ip Type: string -_Description: Keystone IP address: - Enter the IP address of your keystone server, so that ceilometer-api can +_Description: Keystone server IP address: + Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that ceilometer-api can contact Keystone to do the Ceilometer service and endpoint creation. This is the address of the Keystone *server*, I guess. Use our standard "Please enter" formulation. Template: ceilometer/keystone-auth-token Type: password _Description: Keystone Auth Token: - To configure its endpoint in Keystone, ceilometer-api needs the Keystone auth - token. +_Description: Keystone authentication token: + To configure its endpoint in Keystone, ceilometer-api needs the Keystone + authentication token. Do not use abbreviations. And ungermanize the synopsis..:-) Template: ceilometer/endpoint-ip Type: string _Description: Ceilometer endpoint IP address: - Enter the IP address that will be used to contact Ceilometer (eg: the - Ceilometer endpoint IP address). + Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Ceilometer. . This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public Use "please enter". Drop the "eg" part : "eg" is a latinism and would anyway mean "for example" while the address *is* the contact address, period. One could eventually say something like "also named the Ceilometer endpoint IP address" but I don't really see the need tom make things look more complicated than they are. --
Template: ceilometer/register-endpoint Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Register Ceilometer in the Keystone endpoint catalog? Each Openstack service (each API) should be registered in order to be accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now. . Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to connect using the Keystone authentication token. Template: ceilometer/keystone-ip Type: string _Description: Keystone server IP address: Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that ceilometer-api can contact Keystone to do the Ceilometer service and endpoint creation. Template: ceilometer/keystone-auth-token Type: password _Description: Keystone Auth Token: _Description: Keystone authentication token: To configure its endpoint in Keystone, ceilometer-api needs the Keystone authentication token. Template: ceilometer/endpoint-ip Type: string _Description: Ceilometer endpoint IP address: Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Ceilometer. . This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public IP address. Template: ceilometer/region-name Type: string Default: regionOne _Description: Name of the region to register: Openstack can be used using availability zones, with each region representing a location. Please enter the zone that you wish to use when registering the endpoint.
--- ceilometer.old/debian/ceilometer-api.templates 2013-05-18 13:40:43.837128341 +0300 +++ ceilometer/debian/ceilometer-api.templates 2013-05-24 11:19:12.743085643 +0300 @@ -1,31 +1,31 @@ Template: ceilometer/register-endpoint Type: boolean Default: false -_Description: Register Ceilometer in the keystone endpoint catalog? - Each Openstack services (each API) should be registered in order to be +_Description: Register Ceilometer in the Keystone endpoint catalog? + Each Openstack service (each API) should be registered in order to be accessible. This is done using "keystone service-create" and "keystone - endpoint-create". Select if you want to run these commands now. + endpoint-create". This can be done automatically now. . - Note that you will need to have an up and running keystone server on which to - connect using the Keystone auth token. + Note that you will need to have an up and running Keystone server on which to + connect using the Keystone authentication token. Template: ceilometer/keystone-ip Type: string -_Description: Keystone IP address: - Enter the IP address of your keystone server, so that ceilometer-api can +_Description: Keystone server IP address: + Please enter the IP address of the Keystone server, so that ceilometer-api can contact Keystone to do the Ceilometer service and endpoint creation. Template: ceilometer/keystone-auth-token Type: password _Description: Keystone Auth Token: - To configure its endpoint in Keystone, ceilometer-api needs the Keystone auth - token. +_Description: Keystone authentication token: + To configure its endpoint in Keystone, ceilometer-api needs the Keystone + authentication token. Template: ceilometer/endpoint-ip Type: string _Description: Ceilometer endpoint IP address: - Enter the IP address that will be used to contact Ceilometer (eg: the - Ceilometer endpoint IP address). + Please enter the IP address that will be used to contact Ceilometer. . This IP address should be accessible from the clients that will use this service, so if you are installing a public cloud, this should be a public
Source: ceilometer Section: web Priority: optional Maintainer: PKG OpenStack <openstack-devel@lists.alioth.debian.org> Uploaders: Loic Dachary (OuoU) <loic@debian.org>, Julien Danjou <acid@debian.org>, Thomas Goirand <zigo@debian.org>, Ghe Rivero <ghe.rivero@stackops.com>, Mehdi Abaakouk <sileht@sileht.net> Build-Depends: debhelper (>= 9), po-debconf, python-all (>= 2.6.6-3~), openstack-pkg-tools Build-Depends-Indep: pep8, python-argparse, python-anyjson (>= 0.2.4), python-babel, python-coverage, python-docutils, python-eventlet, python-extras, python-flask (>= 0.9), python-glance (>= 2013.1~), python-glanceclient (>= 1:0.6), python-iso8601, python-keystoneclient (>= 1:0.2.3), python-kombu, python-lockfile, python-lxml, python-ming, python-mock, python-mox, python-netaddr, python-netifaces, python-nose, python-nova (>= 2013.1~), python-novaclient (>= 2:2.6.10), python-oslo.config, python-pecan (>= 0.2.1), python-pymongo, python-requests, python-setuptools-git, python-sphinx, python-sqlalchemy (>= 0.7.3), python-sqlalchemy (<< 0.8.0~), python-stevedore (>= 0.6), python-swiftclient, python-unittest2, python-webob (>= 1.2), python-wsme, python-yaml Standards-Version: 3.9.3 Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=openstack/ceilometer.git;a=summary Vcs-Git: git://anonscm.debian.org/openstack/ceilometer.git Homepage: http://wiki.openstack.org/Ceilometer Package: python-ceilometer Section: python Architecture: all Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~) Depends: ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, libjs-jquery, python-argparse, python-anyjson (>= 0.2.4), python-eventlet, python-extras, python-flask (>= 0.9), python-glanceclient (>= 1:0.6), python-greenlet (>= 0.4), python-keystoneclient (>= 1:0.2.3), python-iso8601, python-kombu, python-lockfile, python-lxml, python-netaddr, python-novaclient (>= 2:2.6.10), python-oslo.config, python-pecan (>= 0.2.1), python-pymongo (>= 2.2), python-requests, python-sqlalchemy (>= 0.7.3), python-sqlalchemy (<< 0.8.0~), python-stevedore (>= 0.6), python-swiftclient, python-webob (>= 1.2), python-yaml Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - Python libraries Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems, providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the overall system. . This package contains the Python libraries that are needed for all parts of Ceilometer. Package: ceilometer-common Architecture: all Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~) Depends: python-ceilometer (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, adduser Provides: ${python:Provides} Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - common files Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems, providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the overall system. . This package contains files that are needed for all parts of Ceilometer. Package: ceilometer-collector Architecture: all Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~) Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - collector service Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems, providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the overall system. . This package contains the collector service. Package: ceilometer-api Architecture: all Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~) Depends: adduser, debconf, ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system (API service) Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems, providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the overall system. . This package contains the API service. Package: ceilometer-agent-compute Architecture: all Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~) Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - compute agent Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems, providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the overall system. . This package contains the compute agent. Package: ceilometer-agent-central Architecture: all Pre-Depends: dpkg (>= 1.15.6~) Depends: ${ostack-lsb-base}, ceilometer-common (= ${binary:Version}), ${python:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Description: OpenStack efficient metering counters system - central agent Ceilometer aims to deliver a Single Point Of Contact for billing systems, providing all the counters they need to establish customer billing, accross all current and future OpenStack components. The delivery of counters must be traceable and auditable, the counters must be easily extensible to support new projects, and agents doing data collections should be independent of the overall system. . This package contains the central agent.
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