Re: Things to check in release notes
whats-new.dbk; just a couple of trivial fixes left. The word
"indexation" does exist, by the way, but it's "a technique to adjust
income payments by means of a price index".
--
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Index: whats-new.dbk
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--- whats-new.dbk (revision 9870)
+++ whats-new.dbk (working copy)
@@ -434,7 +434,7 @@
</para>
<para>
For optimal sequencing, all init.d
-scripts should declare their dependencies in a LSB header. This is already the
+scripts should declare their dependencies in an LSB header. This is already the
case for scripts shipped in &debian;, but users should check their local
scripts and consider adding that information.
</para>
@@ -573,7 +573,7 @@
in the file manager, and enjoy.
</para>
<para>
- The Tracker indexation tool is now part of the GNOME desktop. After your
+ The Tracker indexing tool is now part of the GNOME desktop. After your
first login, it will index your desktop, and is now available as the
default search tool. It is also the key to the new GNOME documents tool
to manage your recently used documents.
@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@
Most technologies underlying GNOME are still here: the D-Bus messaging
system, the PolicyKit permissions manager, the GStreamer multimedia
system, the gvfs virtual file system, the MIME system, the ConsoleKit,
- udisks and upower interfaces to hardware management: all are kept without
+ udisks and upower interfaces to hardware management; all are kept without
major changes.
</para>
<para>
@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@
change is that settings for the login prompt have been migrated to
GSettings as well. The configuration file has changed to
greeter.gsettings and settings are not preserved. This only affects
- interface settings; daemon settings are still at the same place.
+ interface settings; daemon settings are still in the same place.
</para>
<para>
The legacy GDM 2.20 package is no longer available; most of its former
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@
The migration of data to the new locations will occur automatically during
the upgrade and will continue to be available at the old and new locations,
with the exception of <filename class='directory'>/lib/init/rw</filename>.
- No action is required on your part, though you may wish to customise which
+ No action is required on your part, though you may wish to customize which
<literal>tmpfs</literal> filesystems are mounted, and their size limits, in
<filename>/etc/default/tmpfs</filename> after the upgrade is complete.
Please see the tmpfs(5) manual page for further details.
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